I’m hooked on this song today, maybe because I’m another year older tomorrow, and I’m feeling I’m getting closer to where ever I’m going. It’s been a cold winter, and I’m feeling like a splinter in amongst the forest timbers, and my written words are only tear drops on the childrens cheeks.
Month: July 2018
Tower To Heaven
There was a raging storm last night, I struggled to sleep, I was in and out of my dreams, and during my semi-conscious times, I jotted down these lines.
I remember the day
Like it was yesterday
A cold morning, ten o’clock
I, a shadow in the paddock
Standing beside a giant pylon
I looked up to heaven
Straight up the tower
The tower of power
Crosses of galvanized iron
Shiny under the winter sun
Wind whistling through its huge steel web
Howling like hades walking dead
And demons screaming in my head
My spirit begun climbing the spire
Clambering higher and higher
Up the pyramid of life’s wires
Desperate, I grasp at my ultimate desire
A visionary mission before I die
To embrace a piece of my angels sky
To the amazing Leonard Cohen, I thank you for being the inspiration behind my writings, over and over your words and songs have soothed the depths of my soul, and again you’ve caressed my heart during my times of sorrow, bless you, up there in your tower of song.
Ivor Steven (c) 2018
If You Can’t See Me Look In Spam

I’m having wordpress problems, and some of my blog comments are flying off into spam, or they’re still out there in cyberspace somewhere. So my apologies to all my friends out there who are not up in space. Please have a look in your spam comments, Ivor’s normal comments may well be there.
Cheers
Ivor. plumber/poet

My Rural Town
WEEKLY PROMPTS, PHOTO CHALLENGE
Our Photo Challenge is , Bucolic
I live on the out-skirts of Geelong, and the city is a reasonable size with a population of 240,000. But here I am, virtually on the town’s northwestern back fence, and only a dead-end dirt road is outside my front door.
The back fences of north-west Geelong The dirt lane outside my home.
At the end of my dirt lane is a walking path that I use frequently. I can walk to my favourite coffee venue, The Moorabool Valley Chocolate Cafe, set in a rustic homestead with a beautiful view over the Moorabool River Valley. Attached link is a poem about the cafe. https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2017/10/15/cheeky-magpie/
The view over the Moorabool Valley Sunset along the walking path
The featured image at the beginning of the post is of our local mountain ranges, called the You-Yangs. Here the picture is taken from Geelong’s Eastern Park/Botanical Gardens, looking across Corio Bay towards the You-Yangs.
A Slide-show of pictures from around our City By The Bay
Ivor Steven (c) 2018
3.2.1 Quote Me! – “Positive Attitude”
Many thanks to Beckie of, Beckie’s Mental Mess , for selecting me to join in her wonderful game called, ‘3.2.1 Quote Me!” . please make a point in checking her site out. It’s full of so many interesting stories, and she’s always lots of fun.
Rules:
Thank the Selector
Post 2 Quotes for the dedicated Topic Of The Day.
Select 3 Bloggers to take part in the ‘3.2.1 Quote Me!’
Note: Although this is the topic for today there is no specific deadline for it, meaning you can answer as and when.
Topic For Today: Positive Attitude
My Quotes for Today Are:
“Real true love is beautiful, with kindness, compassion and consideration being the foundation of every real true love” — Ivor Steven
” Every little bit we do helps, little steps, after little steps, and in time all the little steps produce one big stride towards achieving our goals” — Ivor Steven
“Whatever you create artistically, is the positive result of your thoughts becoming reality” — Ivor Steven
“Music feeds our senses and soothes our souls” — Ivor Steven
My 3 Bloggers For Today Are:
1. Trini Lind – Paths Of The Spirit
2. Linda — Spiritual Dragonfly
3. Laleh — A Voice from Iran
And I’ll end on a positive note with a glorious song by Australian singer/songwriter Alex Lloyd and his classic song, Amazing.
Ivor Steven (c) 2018
“I See The Universe In A Blade Of Grass”
FIFTY YEARS AGO — WE SANG THIS SONG
“I See The Universe In A Blade Of Grass” **
I’m exhausted
And wearing paper-thin
I’ve been crying too often
My salty tears
Have dried my skin
Cracked the corners of my eyes
And etched my chin
My retina’s are burning
X-rays through hedges
My troubled bridge is worn
I cannot see the dawn
I sit alone and stare
At this daily glare
From the children over there
Innocent eyes looking sad and bare
Desperate for care
Gasping for free air
** These words are taken from a line in Sean Rowe’s song, The Lonely Maze, 2012.
Ivor Steven (c) 2018
Dear Friends, A Letter To You
Dear friends
Last night I went out
Enjoyed myself
Good company and plenty of fun
There were some children there
I saw the children laughing
At the foolish antics
Of us silly adults
I arrived back home
After midnight
Then I read in bed
Some of my blog comments
Responses to my recent poems
About “We can help the children”
I was deeply touched
I started crying
Emotions tore at my heartstrings
Tears flooded my soul
Your replies were sincere
And compassionately moving
Dear friends
I thank you
One and all
May our solidarity
“Help the children”
Ivor Steven (c) 2018
Tit Bits #13
This is my 13th writing of “Tit Bits”, and coincidently today is Friday 13th. I’m not sure whether this means good luck or bad luck for my post today ??
Our pain is like rain
The pain comes and goes
Heavy and light
He’s got us trumped
There’s more poison
In his venom
The facts are there, for all to see
But all the blind eyes are covered in cotton wool
Their ears are buried in the sand
And toes paddling in their own bullshit quagmire
Now is the time to help
Doing the little things that count
Little step after little step
And in time they become one big stride
I hope these tears of mine
Become the glassy mirrors
Of hope
For the frightened children
They need our love
Love is a life-line
Love feeds a soul
Love revives a heart
Love is the meaning of life
Life is love
Ivor Steven (c) 2018
A Single Atom
Weekly Word Prompt: Subliminal click to view all the responses to this weeks word prompts
For the weekly word prompt “Subliminal” I’m reposting this old poem of mine “A Single Atom”, which I originally created from a very mixed up and vague dream I had when I was experiencing a lot of guilt complexes about a new relationship I was having at the time, only a year after my wifes passing. My subconscious was subtly injecting doubts into my mind during my sleep !!
A Single Atom
I see a shooting star, traverse the full-moon
Like a jungle bushfire, raging out of sight
I feel the heat of midday, smothering the night
Like a warm body, inside her tomb
I see the dawn, without the golden sun
Like a Lyrebird, singing all out of tune
I hear the morning rain, without a cloud in the sky
Like yesterdays floods, leaving her high and dry
I see a sandy beach, awash by a tidal wave
Like a burning desert, water is her grave
I fill lonely sheets, with empty dreams
Like a dark chasms’ irrelevant beams
I see a summer leaf, wilted by a frosty Autumn
Like an unwatered orchid, opening to an old anthem
I feel like a splintered heart, inside a single atom
Like a snakes dead skin, her rejected emblem
Ivor Steven. (c) 2018
An Ounce Of Gold
Cheque this one out
I’m falling over with joy
I’m about to shout
Monies their ploy
Sending me nought
From their computer toy
It’s up the spout
The Bank’s vague and coy
Ivor Steven (c) 2018
