Today I’m presenting more of my comments, that I post on other writers articles when I am doing my blogging.. Here below, are words I’ve sent to, Dwight, Colleen, Mich, and Colleen again … and I’ve arrange the stanza’s in an order, so as to read like one ‘poem’ , and I think the different “pieces” blended together ok..
In Pieces
“We are a finite speck of the infinite
Our time is but a spark of light
Our existence is the life of a micro battery
Just an electron of the universe’s hatchery” .. To Dwight
“You are the soft glowing beams of moon light
Illuminating the creation of every day
You are my life’s golden stairway” … To Colleen
“These beautiful dreamy words from your heart
Do tickle the celestial sparkles from my soul-mate” … To Mich
“I have seen the eye of every violent storm
And now I rest easy on the station’s outgoing platform” .. To Colleen
Ivor Steven (c) Feb 2021


