What’s it like to be an orange Pumpkin-head.
Only black sockets for eyes instead.
And a cut-out smile full of seeds.
Queer ears made of rings and beads.
Inside, your brain is scooped out for pigs feed.
Leaving a dark void that doesn’t bleed.
On top you’re like a crinkled dome.
And your sore neck’s being speared home.
What’s it like to have a retina thread,
As a throbbing nerve-end tread.
With your cell fibres smashed to a pulp.
Knifing across your tender scalp.
Ebbing towards your aching neck.
And crushing you like a busted shipwreck.
Then a wooden spike pierces your fragile brain.
Where the horrid harpoon spreads your pain.
Photo Source: Amazing Halloween Jack O’Lantern pumpkins, carved by Ray Villafane -pinterest.com
Ivor Steven.

Very creative for the season!
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Thanks, so very much.
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Great stuff, Ivor.
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Thanks Oglach.
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Yikes! Someone made the man in the moon a pumpkin head!
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Maybe we’re all pumpkin heads !!
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Delightfully fun. : )
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Maybe fun for Halloween,
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Perfect accompaniment to the image
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Yes, I was lucky enough to find the image, thanks Derrick.
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Gosh a few dark thoughts went into this one Ivor! I enjoy your poetry no matter how it manifests. Thank you 🙂
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Thanks Sue, haha, my words are there to be enjoyed, whether they’re real or not, that doesn’t matter to me, as long as the readers thinks they’re were worth reading, then I’m quite happy within myself.
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Well, I love reading them Ivor 👍
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Your love makes me feel betterer. …
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That was descriptive!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Seems a little too close to reality. 😦
I hope you are feeling better.
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Slowly getting betterer, and thank you for your kind thoughts. Yes, my words can be quite close to reality sometimes. But I suppose that’s the way I write sometimes…. xx
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It’s perfect, the way you write.
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That was so creative! I felt a bit of a halloweeny Tim Burton style touch to it, which I adore. I hope your pain is getting less and less present. Thanks for sharing your talent with us, I always feel privileged to read you! Hugs!!
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Yes… It’s meant to have a Halloween touch and be a bit macabre, Haha, a pain to write ……
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Well you did it with excruciatingly delightful talent! I love it!
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seasonal and lovely!
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Thank you Ortensia, I’m still to catch-up on your posts, and still struggling to read, my eyes tire so quickly
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Yay Halloween poem! 🎃 it’s so good but I can’t help feel when it comes to pumpkin carving I’ll be having some real feelings of guilt! I’ll just tell the poor thing it’s much needed surgery! 😂💖
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Haha, I like sentimental humour
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Lovely dark stuff 🙂
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A Halloween way of explaining my head pains…..
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Oh! I’m going to have to read it again with that in mind. I hope you’ve been freed of the pain.
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A truly horrible picture and a dark and creepy poem….now I’M going to lock all the doors and windows ;O) x
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It actually got published in Slasher Monster Magazine, last Halloween, and came second in the Halloween comp, …haha, I received $75 prize money…
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Congratulations on having this poem published. It deserves a medal. It is yuck, yuck, yucky, creepy to the max, absolutely perfect in its description, a real treasure for Halloween.
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High praise indeed, thank you dear Helene. Metaphorically it’s about my occipital neuralgia, that I sometimes have to endure. Happily it’s been reasonably under control this year.
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Ivor, that must be very painful, you certainly described it totally the way you must feel it. Well done. Wishing you better days.
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Oh I’m going ok these days, thank you ❤️ Helene,
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Glad for you, Ivor. Be well.
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