An Old Plumber, An Ex-Carer, An Amateur Poet, Words From The Heart
Author: ivor20
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
Some days the sky feels larger than usual. On a sunny blue-sky day, a fantail and a butterfly briefly shared the same boundless canvas above, inspiring this tanka about wonder, flight, and Nature’s sunlit cosmic dome.
Sky Blue Dome (a Tanka)
I see a Fantail En route to his sky-blue home And a butterfly Bravely fluttering toward Nature’s sunlit cosmic dome
As this tanka found its wings, then a song arrived, as if it had been part of the journey all along.
Hello, dear readers and followers. I contribute to Coffee House Writers Magazine (USA) every second week, and I’m delighted to share that my latest poem, “Steve the Snail Goes Visiting (a Haiku),” appears in the new issue. You can read it by following the link below. >> Steve the Snail Goes Visiting – Coffee House Writers
Frankie and I headed out for a damp mid-afternoon walkie and happened upon Steve the Snail and several of his friends, all making the most of the misty rain. From the look of it, Steve was on an important mission…
Some adventures begin with a single glide across a garden path. A little haiku, a curious snail, and a song about an unexpected journey.
“A blade of grass is the journeywork of the stars.” ― Walt Whitman, Leaves of Grass
Snakes in the Grass
Through my eyes of broken glass I see a holy battleground’s Blades of bloodied lemongrass Are still being voraciously mowed down
With my soul drowning in molten brass I hear the sands of time blowing past The desperate outstretched hands Of the world’s prevailing peaceful class
Beneath skies of darkening light I feel whispers falling upon this warring blight Why does truth linger on our damaged blindside While fear and falsehoods hide?
Some battles are fought in fields, others in hearts. Beneath every blade of grass, a story waits unseen, and sometimes quiet warnings arrive on the gentlest breeze.
Some evening skies seem to wear a crown of their own. These three photographs inspired a short reflection on the changing shapes of cloud and light as day drifts into twilight.
Over at Weekly Prompts, the Colour Challenge for October is Grey/Gray. To visit their fabulous site, please click >> Here.
Two Crowns
Eventide
The sun is settling down behind the horizon’s heliotrope clouds draped in ribbons of golden brown
Twilight Time
the clouds are drifting down over the horizon’s terraced treetops cloaked by the corpulent sky’s chunky crown
Beyond Time
Nature’s wonders are our world’s comfy eiderdown surrounding the horizon’s mystical realm: there endures the planet’s glorious crown
Some crowns are worn for a moment, others endure beyond time. The beauty of our world asks for nothing more than to be noticed.
Inspiration often arrives unannounced. A magpie in flight, a walk with Frankie, and a handful of daisies beside the track combined to form this reflection on life’s journey. While we may spend much of our lives looking towards distant horizons, fulfilment is often found in the simple moments we pause long enough to notice.
Flight
Life is not about a good take-off nor how high we are able to climb No matter how far the journey There are always clouds in the sky
Life is not about the speed of the flight Fulfilment is in the grace of our wings and how smoothly we manage to travel through the storms that always surround us.
Actually, life is about taking your doggie for walkies and noticing nature’s distinguished daisies.
Some journeys climb through clouds, while others lead us home again. This morning’s flight ended beside a walking track, where a magpie, a handful of daisies, and a faithful walking companion quietly revealed what matters most.
I wrote this poem in November 2017 during one of my neuralgia attacks. At the time, I genuinely felt as though I was approaching the end of the road. Yet, in the end, it could not happen. There was simply too much love surrounding me. The poem was written in two parts, and for Part 2, “An Answer Follows”, my dear friend Terry Fielding later composed a song using those words. The audio recording is included below.
What began as a poem during a difficult time was later transformed into song by my dear friend, Terry Fielding.
Throwback Friday, Followed By Two, featuring Part 2, “An Answer Follows”
Part 1. One Day Follows
The abyss is bigger, not less On these days of darkness The owls are singing sad tunes On these days of bad moons The brain is harpooned again On these days of constant pain The sunshine has gone, I confess On these days of over stress The mind has little attitude On these days of sleepy solitude
Part 2. An Answer Follows
You’ve all walked into my heart And you’ve run into my past You’ve all flooded into my soul And you’ve soared into my dreams I crave that … one day soon Tomorrow, or another day too That all your kind hearts Will be bathing themselves In the soothing oils Of your glorious souls
Music has long been part of Terry’s life. Before listening to our collaboration, enjoy this performance ofThe Fields of Athenry, recorded in his home studio.
After overnight rain, a puddle became an ocean and Steve the Snail became an explorer. Setting out with water wings and a sense of adventure, he inspired this playful tanka about a determined voyage in search of the sea.
Steve the Snail Goes Swimming (a Tanka)
I’m a floating home An old snail with water wings Dancing and swimming A real amphibian Bravely searching for the sea
Some journeys begin with a puddle and a little imagination. Steve was already searching for the sea when “Ocean” arrived to accompany him on the way.
Some Australian traditions have a way of returning each year as faithfully as the seasons. Melbourne Cup Day is one of them. Inspired by a half-moon drifting across a spring sky and a chance encounter between Frankie and a horse on our evening walk, this poem reflects on a race that briefly captures the nation’s attention.
An Aussie Tradition
The first Tuesday in November, even the chary moon remembers it’s Melbourne Cup Day, a 165-year-old Australian tradition.
The day when the nation stops for a horse race, and even non-gamblers come out of hibernation, up the ante without feeling out of place.
For a few fleeting minutes, the nation’s heartbeat follows the pounding hooves. And somewhere above the track, the old chary moon remembers once again.
As the old chary moon remembers once again, here’s Slim Dusty’s tribute to Australia’s most famous horse race.
Some photographs linger in the mind long after they are taken. These images of a bird beneath the sun and moon quietly followed me into sleep and became a dream. By morning, the dream had found its wings and eventually became this wishful song.
Another Wishful Song
I dreamt of being a peaceful dove, blissfully flying above our spectacular solar sun and our magnanimous moon.
I gazed out upon the universe’s vast beyond. Would my weary, wishful wings carry me to where I belong?
Am I wrong to imagine there’s another song further away than my kingdom’s billabong?
Some dreams remain with us long after we wake. This song felt like a fitting companion for one that found its wings.
Yesterday’s heavy sky hung low and grey, yet the birds seemed unconcerned. Their black-and-white silhouettes drifted between cloud and light, carrying a quiet reminder that even beneath the heaviest skies, nature continues to write its own story. This poem grew from those fleeting moments in flight.
Black and White Bookends
Come fly with me, my friends, I’ve heard our heavy sky’s on the mend, defying the world’s breathless trend.
Today is not the end. Feel free, there’s no need to pretend. Let us all transcend this man-made pitchblende.
We are not to be condemned for wearing nature’s black-and-white portends, between her unpenned bookends.
The black-and-white birds drifted on beneath a healing sky, while the clouds continued writing their own silent story on the wind.
Nature’s bookends are no longer unpenned. A poem now sits quietly on the shelf between them.