Sunday morning bliss
A memory, a wish
Confirmation, of a promise
A togetherness kiss
My tears do dwell
I was under her spell
There’s no need for show and tell
You know my heart well
There’s a memory lane
Within my sighing veins
Pumping slowly, flowing deep
A river of dreams that never sleep
Visions of a begone life
A joyful husband and wife
The glory days are gone
Happily, I’ve begun to move on
And remember with fondness
Our first, and last kiss
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Ivor Steven (c) 2018
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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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I just want to send hugs and good energising thoughts. remembering is so bittersweet.
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Thanks for the hugs, my memories are mostly sweet these days, I hope my words convey my good energies. Although it’s back to reality today, I’m plumbing in the afternoon. Have a good day Gina..
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yes they are very uplifting Ivor. happy working. I am at work too so its nice to feel your positive energy this morning. lovely day to you too
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Thanks Gina, although it’s cold here, only 11’c brrrr.
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a lovely 28 Celsius on the equator☀
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Beautifully expressed Ivor. A lovely poem dear friend.
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Thank you Walt, my happy energies are flowing this week.
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Keep them going my friend. It makes us all feel good 🙂
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Gorgeous poem! Goes perfectly with Cohen’s song.
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The last verse contains so much tenderness and pain, it’s almost a separate poem.
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Very observant Robert, actually the 4 stanza’s were little poems I’d written over the weekend, and this morning I join them together, and the longer poem is the result, I’m hoping it does’t read too disjointed.
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It doesn’t feel disjointed at all.
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I’m pleased with that, thank you
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🙂
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Looking back fondly and moving on with hope, so lovely Ivor.
8:30 AM here 17° and raining heavily.
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5.50pm here Sue, a cool wind blows, through my courtyard, 11’C under my verandah, but I’m still barbecuing for dinner. Thank you for your lovely comments.
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Enjoy your dinner Ivor. I’m still trying to decide what to have for breakfast!
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This is a beautiful poem
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This poem is so poignant and beautiful, Ivor! One of your best!
I can’t even imagine the pain and loss you have been through. 😦 You must miss her so so so much. 😦 But, I know she is still with you in so many ways and will always be in your heart. 🙂 And she would want you to think of the good memories and smile and laugh…as you move forward. 🙂
(((HUGS)))
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Thank you for the Hugs….. we went through
a lot together, and I’m not sure what I’ve sent you, but you might like to read “Olive Eyes” and “Stroke, Who’s Left To Row The Boat” ,
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Ivor, I sighed while reading this. A sigh of appreciation, a sigh of recognition (of love), a sigh that there is such a soul here (yours).
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I sigh at myself sometimes, But I know writing is good for me, and your comments are good for me…xx
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Sighing is a good exercise. And we will just sigh together. 🙂
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Sigh, and sigh😑😑
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Beautiful Ivor. So glad that you have moved on, but you will always remember the first and last kiss.
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Love this so much! ❤️❤️
Keep writing!
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Thank you ❤️ Janae, for reading and commenting on my poem, I’m pleased you enjoyed my words
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Ivor, Leonard the perfect combination, cherry on top words framed beautifully.
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Thanks Chris, another enjoyable piece for me ☺️
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Another excellent tribute, Ivor
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I watched my mom go through what you describe. It broke my heart to watch hers shatter. I’m so glad you are finding a way back to peace and joy, Ivor. You deserve so much joy and love in your life. ♥.
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