Liquid Joy (Revised)
Tears of liquid joy
Like rivers of fear
The memories so clear
And a toast to cheer
Tears of liquid joy
Like waves from the heart
Two great oceans apart
And wishing for another restart
Tears of liquid joy
Like dredged canals of the soul
Leaking from a broken porthole
And wishing for a free parole
Tears of liquid joy
A flowing molten lava
Passing a secret convoy
And singing like the last choirboy
Crying liquid joy
Ivor Steven (c)Β 2019
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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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500! Congratulations Ivor.
(You donβt look a blog over 50)
Donβt overdo the liquid celebrations,
or you composing a βLiquid Laughβ
… as they say in the classics π€ Like
the Adventures of Bazza McKenzie.
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Feel bloody bogged
Give me back the Trogs
Dance the nights away
Beyond “Yesterday”
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You are a Wild Thing πΈ
as Jimi would singπ΅
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Xaviers Spirit Bird
Leonard’s Villanelle
Sing the truth
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well done!!
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Thanks Gina, it seemed an impossibility a mere year and half ago.
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time does fly by especially when we are doing what we like, so proud of your achievements Ivor!
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Your praise warms my heart, thank you
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Congratulations on the milestone. May you find tears of joy again
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I’m quite happy with the number, just a year and a half ago I had no idea what I was doing π
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We learn fast on here
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Happy 500 Ivor!!!! May the next 500 be as wonderful (and fun). π
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Yes, but I don’t know how it happened, all I do is write poem’s
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π And post them 500 times π
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wow that is an achievement in only 18 months, well done!
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I don’t know how it happened, and I didn’t expect it. All I do is write π π
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lol and cry, cry and write … you old soak or sook … π
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Maybe a bit of both
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π
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500, awesome Ivor. Keep em coming
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I might have to slow down a bit but I’ll keep writing π
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Wonderful, absolutely wonderful
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Congratulations Ivor, took a few weeks off so belated Christmas wishes and Happy New Year – great when a plan comes together? especially when it wasn’t planned.
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I think you’d call it organised chaos
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Just like my Christmas so. How is the health holding up?
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I’m improving slowly, achieving good health shall take time
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Congratulations Ivor. Here’s to the next 500!
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Yes Peter it’s a fine number in a year and a half
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Congratulations.
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Thank you Adnama
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You are Welcome. π
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You have been a faithful blogger! Congrats!!!
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Thank you Maranda π€π€
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Congratulations on your 500th post Ivor. The poem is lovely Joplin is great, as always.
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Yes the poem and Janis seemed to be a good combination
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Lovely poem . Congratulations Ivor. I havenβt a clue how many I’ve done. I think I’ve had the odd notification and then typically forget what I was told. I might have remembered if I’d thought any of mine were as worthy of yours! Well done Ivor! π
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Hi Sue, I’m just out of bed, 9.30am. Thank you, for lovely comments, a glorious start to my day xx
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I love the way you and I meet up at the start and end of our days. You slept in today I think. Hope you have a good day, for me it’s just after 10:30 PM and my bedtime. Once again I hope you have a good day, goodnight, look forward to seeing you tomorrow. π
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Yes I slept in, Tired after yesterdays outing, sleep well Sue. oooxx
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Glad you managed to sleep in. I will do my utmost to do the same. Night night ivor π
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Congrats for reaching this milestone! And what a wonderful poem to commemorate the occasion. Liquid joy indeed! ππ
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The number sprung out at me, and I’ve no idea about these things, all I do is write my poems, but after 18 months, It was a pleasant surprise, thank you, and yes the poem is an old favourite xx
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Time flies when youβre having fun! Youβre quite prolific with your wonderful words! We are lucky you are sharing your gift with us.
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Oh that’s very special of you say so xx
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YAY! Congrat, Ivor! Happy 500!!! π
I will do something to celebrate!!! π
Thank you for being a wonderful blogger and a good friend!!! π
Your poems, songs, photos and comments have added joy to my life in 2018!!! π
2019 (((HUGS))) π
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Nice to read your first ever/500th post! π
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Wow .. Thatβs a while ago .. now Iβm reading the post myself β¦ ah yes, βLiquid Joyβ ππ
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It came up on my WP suggestions! Just to let you know Iβm taking a break this weekend, so I will catch up with my reading on Monday π
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Wow that’s interesting… having a break is a good idea … ππ€
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Yes, I really need it! If not Iβll be forced to take one due to burnout π
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I understand. .. Iβm teetering on the edge ..rest up good .. ππ
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Please do the same! π
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Yes … It’s been a hectic two months … ππ€
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Well I also need to prepare my book launch so Iβll probably have to post less on here for the time being too π ππ
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Yes … your schedule sounds very hectic … you’ll definitely need to set yourself some priorities … Cheers … and keep smiling .πππ.
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I do have two young children as well π€ͺ
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Have you got your superwoman costume ready ππ€
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Been wearing it for some time already π π€©π
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I thought so ..πππ
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