My dying dusk is falling out of bounds
Evening clouds are not making a sound
I cannot hear moon shadows hit the ground
And I see the silent night being slowly drowned
Then my midnight queen, arises to be crowned
The Goddess of Light, and I’m spellbound
Ivor Steven (c) August 2019
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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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IVOR! This is STUNNING!
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I suppose this is what happens when I write poems at midnight !!! my fantasy world comes alive…….
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It surely did!
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So beautiful and profound!
(((HUGS))) π
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I’m staying positive Carolyn xxx ((Hugs))
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Good! π
I’m try to do that, too. Kinda’ sluggish emotionally tonight which is very unlike me. π¦
(((HUGS)))
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I know some days are harder than others, But my Carole would like to see me pushing the best I can xxxx
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Amazing Ivor!!! I love thisββ
βI cannot hear moon shadows hit the groundβ So well done!!
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I’m so pleased how the words flowed, and not going to explain it to anybody, I think the reader can interpret the any way that they want to…. πππ€π€π
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I love that you leave it to our interpretation! πΊ
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A magical piece, Ivor!
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I truly appreciate your lovely comments
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My pleasure!
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Love this.
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Thank you Claudia, only a short piece, but I was able to pack lots of fullness into the words ππ€
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You are soooo good, my friend! A pure delight.
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And you are so kind to me xx
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Gosh Ivor, this is beautiful. The silence of the night. Spellbound!
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Oh Isadora… I was amazed by the clarity of my thoughts and words and they all had profound meaning for me……
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I love the sounds of silence, SnG got it right … and this is magical considering your mood … your heart knows better π
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I’m staying positive my friend…..
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yea β€
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Wow! π
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Yep….. one of my best pieces lately….
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