Happy birthday mate
No, I’m not late
I would have got that stare otherwise
No, never a cross word from your eyes
Everyday, the gentle guy
Yes dad, you were our sunrise
Kindness, compassion, a heart oversized
Yes dad, always by our sides
Everyday, you earned a Nobel prize
Yes dad, always loves in your eyes
Ivor Steven (c) Feb 2020
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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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What a lovely tribute
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Thank you… a lovely dad….
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Oh, what a wonderful tribute to your wonderful dad, Ivor!
I will do something today to celebrate the day of his birth AND to celebrate the life he lived!
I’m so glad you had such a great dad!
From what you’ve said about him in past blog-posts I wish I could’ve known him! I know I would’ve enjoyed him!
HUGS!!! 🙂
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A friend of mine was a friend of dad’s
the love of mine, was the love of dad’s xx
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That’s sweet!
And the way it should be! 🙂
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Yep, the way families were.. .
Before this TV and digital age
💙🌏❤️
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Happy Birthday to your dad.
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Thank you…
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You’re welcome.
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💖
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A wonderful tribute. He was a fortunate man to be so well-loved and I’m certain deservedly so. 🙂
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So beautiful Ivor. You and your dad resemble one another in more than one way. 🙂
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Lovely Ivor… you must have been close…. ❤
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She was a gorgeous friend of Carole’s…… they would come around and take Carole for a girl’s night out, quite often…….. we still get together for lunch, every couple of months, in memory of Carole, …. they are a beautiful group of people……xxx.
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I am so glad you have that connection. That is special.
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Carole was a special lady and her friends were/are very special people…….xxxx
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Birds of a feather….. her love still lives on in those friends hearts… life is pretty amazing really.
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Here’s a draft of the words to my proposed poem later on….
Calming the Soul
Today’s cool breeze, dries my eyes
And I’m comfy, under this shady palm
Watching, sparkling faerie ripples on the bay
And silvery waves in the cloudy sky
I see new footprints upon ageless sand
And the town’s daily fairy-boat sails by
I’m bathing in the day’s caressing body balm
And my fragile soul’s reciprocating the calm
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This is stunning Ivor. I adore the last line particularly…”my fragile soul’s reciprocating the calm”
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Thank you, I’m searching files for photos, and youtube for a song, I think the poem is nearly ok… xxx((Hugs))
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Ivor, this is so incredibly beautiful. The love for your father, conveyed in this heartwarming and beautiful poem.
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Thank you Rachel…. the words come from my heart… has was an incredibly beautiful man and the best father a bloke could wish to have…. through Carole’s health and sickness he loved her dearly…. ……….. (tears)…………
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… tears… yes. And hugs to you my friend. Your father sounded like a wonderful man, and it seems you turned our very much like him xox
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A fine tribute, Ivor
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Thank you Derrick, for your kindness….
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My you look like your Father a lovely tribute to him. You were blessed with their support with Carole fortunate to have so much love around you at a most difficult time for you all.
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Carole was indeed blessed, and very fortunate to have had glorious family around her… Xx
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Beautiful sentiments penned in Poetic form – lovely 🙂
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Thank you Jaquin, I appreciate your lovely comments 💙🌏
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A lovely tribute to your dad, Ivor. You were fortunate to have him for a father.
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Thank you for your kind comments 💙🌏
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happy birthday Papa, your son is an amazing man!
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Aww Ivor! Such a lovely tribute! God bless his soul. 💙
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