G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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32 thoughts on “A Tree Roots’ Exposed Colours”
i love this one, ivor. those roots don’t give up and keep it all afloat.
I am fascinated by what I have learned about tree roots. Recently I learned that dying trees/roots pass their nutrients on to living trees. What a great existence and ending. And continuing.
Ivor, I was very touched by this lovely poem. Old trees have such character and have been witness to so many events. They are survivors, and their scars are what make them beautiful!
Thank you Cheryl, I drifted a bit in this poem, and ended using.. metaphorically.. the old trees as the coloured people we share our planet with…. If you read it that way, you might see my jumbled thoughts… maybe I made a mess of it.. π€π
I didn’t read it that way. The poem seemed perfectly coherent to me! And everything you write comes from a kind and loving heart! We are all brothers and sisters! Take care, Cheryl
Thank you, yes, I’ve metaphorically used the trees as the coloured/indigenous people of our world. So many people groups have had to be so resilient, strong, brave, etcβ¦and keep moving no matter how they are treated/mistreated. We should all be more like the roots of a tree, and share the earth we live on….πππ
A timely message in a wonderful poem, Ivor!
So many people groups have had to be so resilient, strong, brave, etc…and keep moving no matter how they are treated/mistreated. We should all be more like the roots of a tree.
HUGS!!! π
Thank you dear Carolyn, and I’m so pleased you understood the analogy I was making between the trees and the coloured /indigenous people of our world, and there strength and resilience during their terrible times of persecution… Yes, our planet is here to be shared by all of our brothers and sisters πππππβ€π
Oh Carolyn I sent you a Email yesterday,? I hope that you have received it ππ§
i love this one, ivor. those roots don’t give up and keep it all afloat.
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Thanks Beth…
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A lovely poem Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje…
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Youβre welcome π
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I am fascinated by what I have learned about tree roots. Recently I learned that dying trees/roots pass their nutrients on to living trees. What a great existence and ending. And continuing.
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Yes Colleen, we can learn a lot about our existence from the trees…
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Ivor, I was very touched by this lovely poem. Old trees have such character and have been witness to so many events. They are survivors, and their scars are what make them beautiful!
All the best! Cheryl
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Thank you Cheryl, I drifted a bit in this poem, and ended using.. metaphorically.. the old trees as the coloured people we share our planet with…. If you read it that way, you might see my jumbled thoughts… maybe I made a mess of it.. π€π
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I didn’t read it that way. The poem seemed perfectly coherent to me! And everything you write comes from a kind and loving heart! We are all brothers and sisters! Take care, Cheryl
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Nearly 1.00am time for sleep π΄π΄
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Ivor, the resilience…so beautifully expressed!
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Thank you Pinam βΊππ
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My pleasure. ππ
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Wonderful poem, Ivor! Strong roots empower renewal.
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Thank you Eugenia βΊππ
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You’re most welcome! π
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Beautifully put Ivor.
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Thank you Sue ππβΊ
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I love this one! It’s a gorgeous poem very skillfully voiced. Well done β€β€β€
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Thank you, yes, I’ve metaphorically used the trees as the coloured/indigenous people of our world. So many people groups have had to be so resilient, strong, brave, etcβ¦and keep moving no matter how they are treated/mistreated. We should all be more like the roots of a tree, and share the earth we live on….πππ
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What a wonderful metaphor! You are so very right β€π₯°β€π₯°β€π₯°
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Love the mix of the roots and people and colors… awesome song too! β€οΈππππ€π
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Yeah… the song Colours, you had on post, helped me form the 2nd stanza of my poem, ..πππππ€π€π€ππ
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A timely message in a wonderful poem, Ivor!
So many people groups have had to be so resilient, strong, brave, etc…and keep moving no matter how they are treated/mistreated. We should all be more like the roots of a tree.
HUGS!!! π
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Thank you dear Carolyn, and I’m so pleased you understood the analogy I was making between the trees and the coloured /indigenous people of our world, and there strength and resilience during their terrible times of persecution… Yes, our planet is here to be shared by all of our brothers and sisters πππππβ€π
Oh Carolyn I sent you a Email yesterday,? I hope that you have received it ππ§
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I did! Thank you!!! π
It’s been a busy past few days for me…just now getting around to answering e-mails today. π
HUGS!!! π
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I’ve just read your email… wow.. thank you…ππ
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You’re welcome! π
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Lovely, thoughtful, description
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I enjoyed this, Ivor. I especially liked these lines,
Even though your footings were open and bare
Skinless bones exposed to the cold air
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Thank you… It was a very cold day, and I was feeling sorry for tree-roots…π
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