G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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28 thoughts on “A Finite in the Infinite”
Love this, Ivor. Vivid imagery. Round 2 is already here in the US.
Verse 2 made me chuckle. I had visions of you at the beach feeding the seagulls and throwing rocks into the ocean. Yes, “Romancing the Stone” gets old. Glad you are getting out!
Vivid word-pics…the flow is lovely…and the 2nd verse made me smile. π
(((HUGS))) π
PS…the song wasn’t available. ??? I might be having some internet troubles right now…so I’ll check back later.
The songs an ELO one ‘We are Born To Die’… yes I enjoyed the 2nd verse too… (The Great White Ghost is Trump)…. and the hungry seagulls are his followers…. Whoops, Ivor’s piece of wit…. Oh..and the rock I threw, fell off his racist Wall… whoops, again…
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Thank you Eugenia, I was just reminding this human race we are but a dot in our universe.
The 2nd verse is a bit witty.. I find a rock fallen from Trump’s “Wall” and throw it out into the ocean, where I hit “The Great White Ghost” in the head, but still his hungry supporters want more π»π
Love this, Ivor. Vivid imagery. Round 2 is already here in the US.
Verse 2 made me chuckle. I had visions of you at the beach feeding the seagulls and throwing rocks into the ocean. Yes, “Romancing the Stone” gets old. Glad you are getting out!
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I’m glad you chuckled at the 2nd verse, it didn’t quite fit my poem, but then it did…
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Great descriptive language!
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Thanks Beth… yes my mind went wandering around..
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Brilliant piece, Ivor. The second stanza simply rocks the poetic casbah.
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Thank you Jez, I to like my 2nd verse, a nice bit of poignant sarcasm
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Absolutely brilliant beautiful!!
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Thank you, that’s very kind of you ππ
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The perfect lady line. We all are the finite in the infinite.
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Thank you Sadje, I appreciate your excellent comment…π
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It was to be,β the perfect last line!β π
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Ha.. I guessed that… π
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Lol!
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Superb
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Thank you Rajani.. ππ
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Vivid word-pics…the flow is lovely…and the 2nd verse made me smile. π
(((HUGS))) π
PS…the song wasn’t available. ??? I might be having some internet troubles right now…so I’ll check back later.
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The songs an ELO one ‘We are Born To Die’… yes I enjoyed the 2nd verse too… (The Great White Ghost is Trump)…. and the hungry seagulls are his followers…. Whoops, Ivor’s piece of wit…. Oh..and the rock I threw, fell off his racist Wall… whoops, again…
((hugs))
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Your cleverness was noticed. π
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Yeah πππ
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Splendid – profound and fun at the same time
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Thank you Derrick, and yes you’re quite right in saying that….
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A fun one Ivor. π
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Yes.. a bit witty,.. especially the 2nd verse ππ
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Wow! This is brilliant, Ivor! A bit of humor is needed these days!
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Thank you Eugenia, I was just reminding this human race we are but a dot in our universe.
The 2nd verse is a bit witty.. I find a rock fallen from Trump’s “Wall” and throw it out into the ocean, where I hit “The Great White Ghost” in the head, but still his hungry supporters want more π»π
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“The power of the universe glows at night….And I am but a finite in the infinite”…..beautiful poem….loving those lines
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Thank you kindly, for your lovely comments..
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You’re welcome β¨
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