

My new book “Tullawalla”, is due to be released on 30th March, and for preorder, here are the links
Barnes and Noble.. Tullawalla by Ivor Steven, Kerri Costello, Hardcover | Barnes & Noble® (barnesandnoble.com)
Amazon.. Amazon.com: Tullawalla eBook: Steven, Ivor, Costello, Kerri, Harris, patricia: Books
www.books2read.com/Tullawalla
Today here is another poem, that didn’t make the final list, and was ‘cut’ from my new Book “Tullawalla”… Maybe I thought the poem “Five Shades of Grey” was not substantial enough .. !!
Five Shades of Grey
Daylight turns into night
Ravens scatter in mid-flight
Dark clouds overlay
Five shades of grey
Thor’s hammer roars
His spark of fire, soars
Fiercely a flaming bolt strike’s
Piercing frightened psyches
Ivor Steven (c) March 2021

Another great poem !! 🙂
LikeLike
Thank you Pragalbha ..😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful description of a thunderstorm! Skillfully and sensitively written. Lovely imagery! ❤ Bravo, Ivor!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Up in NSW they are severe storms and flooding… I’m afraid my poem is far too appropriate at the moment !!… we are a land of extremes Cheryl … this time last year it was drought and severe bushfires…. 😀
LikeLike
you’ve described this powerful storm so well!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very good imagery Ivor.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Sadje.. 😊🌏🌌
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is very atmospheric! I could feel the lightning strike⚡️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Powerful poem! I can hear the thunder and see the lightening!!! 🙂
I love the rain, but worry about those experiencing the flooding. 😦
That vid is fabulous! Wowza on their cello performance!
(((HUGS))) 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
A fun version of AC/DC’s ‘Thunderstruck’ by the 2Cellos … another great Aussie band… I know when I wrote this one a few years age, that I was thrilled with the powerful imagery by using so few words….. and flooding here in Australia has inundated vast areas of NSW.. we are due for flooding in eastern Victoria over the next few days.. It’s been a soggy start to our Autumn… 😀🙄
LikeLiked by 1 person
How are you feeling today, Ivor?!
Just checkin’ in!
(((HUGS)))
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for asking Carolyn … I’m going ok.. just a few technical problems…. my old computer has a touch of ‘slow-mo’ and my old mobile phone has blacked out on me…. all very frustrating … with my book launch week starting today… my brothers coming to fix my computer tomorrow .. and I had to purchase a new iPhone this afternoon …. anxiety level was high… hopefully I’ll be back on track with my book launch week tomorrow… a bad case of bad timing… 😀😎🙄
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hang in there! Bestest wishes and prayers!
So glad your brothers can help!
Those tech problems do come with anxiety.
UGHS On having to get a new phone…but you will enjoy the new phone! 🙂
(((HUGS))) for the UGHS!!! 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Carolyn … the new is going well… which is helping … and I’ll be able to do my book/publishers promo commitments today.. Phew !!… 😀🙄🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
A perfect storm
LikeLiked by 1 person
Love the poem, and that’s one of my favourite videos 💜💜
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yeah. the video suited my intense poem 😀😎
LikeLike
It certainly does 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Stormy weather superbly expressed!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Eugenia. yes in a few words the storm strikes 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure, Ivor!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oo, I was not expecting the sudden brilliance of Thor’s lightning bolt! The title is as evocative as the writing. ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Jaya, , i’m pleased my words captured your attention.. 😀😎
LikeLiked by 1 person
I was introduced to this just over a year ago — and am still recovering 🙂 amazing !
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you John for your kind words 😄
LikeLike
Very good
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for reading and commenting
LikeLiked by 1 person