An Old Plumber, An Ex-Carer, An Amateur Poet, Words From The Heart
Up and Down
Today on Weekly Prompts the Weekend challenge is: Side by Side. Please visit their fabulous site by clicking on here >> Here. The poem below is my response to their prompt
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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44 thoughts on “Up and Down”
Wowww.! Ivor, This is amazing..! Very BEAUTIFULLY written my friend..! You’re really awesome..! Have a joyous weekend..!π
Excellent poem, Ivor! We can all relate.
As you know, too well, life will always be up and down…so we celebrate the ups and don’t let the downs defeat us. π
Lockdowns can restrict our movements…but we must not let Lockdowns lockdown our emotions or our spirits! π Lockdowns can’t restrict our imaginations and our creativity! We can stay strong, positive, and keep encouraging, caring, uplifting, etc.! Your spirit, attitude, and words help us, Ivor!
(((HUGS))) π
Yes .. lockdowns are different and a simplified way of living .. which my poem emphasisesβ¦ and there is always hope. .. and the wonderful song was a good finale for my words πππ
Wowww.! Ivor, This is amazing..! Very BEAUTIFULLY written my friend..! You’re really awesome..! Have a joyous weekend..!π
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Thank you Filarance .. words are a beautiful visual expression of thoughts πππ
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Yeah, that’s true Ivor..!π
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Nicely done. Jackie and I wish you well
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Thank You Jackie and Derrick
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Now, if you only write music you’d have a very catchy song with this one!π
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I would love to be able to write music πΆ, but my YouTube selection will have to do πΆππ
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Youβve said it so well Ivor.
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Thanks Sadje.. yes a day in the life of lockdown ππ
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Story of millions.
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So good, Ivor!
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Thank you Lois ππ
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nice one Ivor… and when does it end!πππππππππππππ
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Oh Cindy.. when will it end .. Iβve so much more to do β¦πβοΈπ
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best not for a looooong time.. xo π
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Patiently we wait πππ
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I hope you will be out and about soonπ
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Maybe, maybe not. ??
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nothing is certain!!!!!!!
We have to keep the faith!β£οΈβ£οΈ
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Hope upon hope is our strength ππ
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Yes soooo true and praying tooππ
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I hear you! Looks like I wonβt be able to visit home in August as planned. Take care of yourself!
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Yes.. take care .. my 70th birthday plans for this week have been postponed until βwheneverβ ππ
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Such good fun rhythm to this, yet it is seriously meaningful! So beautiful!!
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Thank you Pragalbha. .. yes Iβm trying to look on bright side of Lockdown πππΆ
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good one, Ivor! I always think about how often adults are saying to kids – “sit up” or “sit down!”
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Excellent poem, Ivor! We can all relate.
As you know, too well, life will always be up and down…so we celebrate the ups and don’t let the downs defeat us. π
Lockdowns can restrict our movements…but we must not let Lockdowns lockdown our emotions or our spirits! π Lockdowns can’t restrict our imaginations and our creativity! We can stay strong, positive, and keep encouraging, caring, uplifting, etc.! Your spirit, attitude, and words help us, Ivor!
(((HUGS))) π
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Yes .. lockdowns are different and a simplified way of living .. which my poem emphasisesβ¦ and there is always hope. .. and the wonderful song was a good finale for my words πππ
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Brilliant, Ivor. Very uplifting post! β€ All the best!
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Yes .. in lockdown, we can cope .. keep it simple, and go through your routine ππ
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Added to my list of Ivor Favorites! I love this Ivor. So ‘simply’ stated but SO poignant and emotional.
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Thank you Colleen. β¦ sometimes the simple way works the best .. ππ
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I love this, Ivor! Bravo!
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Thank you Eugenia ππ
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My pleasure, Ivor! π
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Lockdown! Here we go again π‘
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Yup !!!
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Never ends…
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Fantastic really clever. I really enjoyed the side to side contrast. βΊ
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Thank you π the fu side of lockdown
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nice lockdown chant which echoes mine, hang in there you can do this!
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Iβm going , except for my writers cramp ππ
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werent we all so sick of lockdown? Thank god its over!
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