My poem today is created from comments that I posted to other poets sites. in response to their creative poems. The fellow writers in Stanza order are …
1. Sadje >> https://lifeafter50forwomen.com/2023/08/04/when-eyes-confuse-the-mind-a-pantoum/
2. Grace >> https://graceofthesun.com/unchained-2/
3 & 4. Bart >> https://bartbarkerpoet.com/2023/08/14/dive/
Freedom is for the Birds
What to believe
What our eyes see
Or what our mind needs
In freedom, our hearts glide with pride
In chains, our souls cower and hide
Is freedom only for the Birds?
Humans, I am lost for words
Their main appetite is greed
Without planting any seeds
Is Freedom still possible?
Or a mission impossible



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