Twelve months ago, while visiting my cousins on Vancouver Island, I tapped out a small poem on my iPhone — a moment shaped by cedar shadows, cold tides, and old family echoes. Today’s Throwback Friday returns to that quiet day, and to the fallen ancestors the island seemed to remember.
Fallen Ancestors
Above I saw time drift across the sky.
Below I heard a grey, waterlogged tree cry, “Is this the graveyard where my fallen ancestors have been left to die?”
There “Against the sea wall’s merciless granite crown, surrounded by cold water crashing around…
Please “Take my hand, guide me down, so I can cover them with my green nightgown.”
A quiet echo of the sea’s old memory — as the tide carries its stories forward, this song keeps a heart in the water.
In the soft glow of a haloed sun, a seagull and his friends traced a tale across the sky — and one of them decided to share a little wisdom as he climbed into the light, shaping today’s poem.
Cyril the Seagull
Cyril is no ordinary seagull, he’s neither plain nor dull.
I’ve been watching him and his friends, soaring through the clouds’ sunny trends.
When he swooped in close enough, I asked him off-the-cuff:
“Why are you considered to be so commonly homespun?” He puffed his wings like a bumblebee and proudly flew off toward the sun.
Cyril whispered as he climbed: Like humans, we also populate the world However, I’m free to fly and enjoy nature’s phoenix sky uncurled.
And as Cyril lifts into the light, this timeless song rises with him — a quiet reminder to simply be.
Spring arrived today with a quiet kind of joy — a bird lifting into the morning light, gulls gliding above the bay, and a flowering tree catching the sun just right. On my walk to the café, these small moments gathered around me, each one adding its own note to the season’s first song. By the time I sat down with my coffee, a Tanka had already begun to bloom — shaped by the warm promise of the new season.
Spring is Singing (a Tanka)
Daylight’s kissing earth, Its warm glow hugs everything, And the midday sun Thaws my once‑wavering wings — Now nature’s choir is singing
As spring begins to rise, a tender melody of warmth and light to accompany the season’s first song.
“To frozen clods even spring’s invisible law returns with grass and flowers and summer fruits and corn” … Walt Whitman
Hello, dear readers and followers. I contribute to Coffee House Writers Magazine (USA) every second week, and I’m delighted to share that my latest poem,“Spring Will Never Vanish (a Villanelle),” appears in the new issue. You can read it by following the link below. >> Spring Will Never Vanish – Coffee House Writers
As Whitman knew and this villanelle remembers, spring’s law always returns — and Tom Waits sings it home.
Just before midnight, I wandered through Nancy’s whimsical corner of The Elephant’s Trunk, where her poetic mischief nudged me over the fence of common sense. In that soft hour, a playful spark took hold — and this anecdotal poem tumbled out as my midnight excuse. For Nancy >> Poet’s Excuse – The Elephant’s Trunk
And because midnight rarely behaves itself, here’s Nick Cave’s “Night Raid” slipping in with its dark velvet mood before the poem leaps the fence again.
There Are No ‘Cents’ in Pretense
None of it needs to make sense no matter present tense or past tense
Your quill has a license to leap the pretense fence — forget about common sense
And write delicious nonsense in future tense with imaginative effulgence
And to round out this midnight ramble, here’s the song I shared with Nancy — Leonard Cohen’s wonderfully unusual “Ballad of the Absent Mare,” a wandering little masterpiece that trots alongside any poet willing to leap the fence of pretense.
Morning wanderings often gift me small mysteries — a snail tracing Olympic rings across the cold pavement, a chalk‑scribbled “One Day” left by some early riser, and the quiet frost that makes creatures reconsider their usual routes. Today, Steve the Snail seemed to have a message for me… and perhaps for anyone feeling a little twisted by winter’s chill.
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Steve the Snail’s Twisted Trail
I’m wondering if Steve the Snail is lost, discombobulated by the morning frost
He usually leaves a straight-lined trail from the rose garden to the window rail
But today his trail looked like Olympic rings — perhaps a note left by his frozen shoestrings.
A gentle, pressing reminder letter: “Hey Ivor … where’s my new winter sweater?”
For this frosty morning’s whimsical trail, I’ve paired Steve’s looping, Olympic‑ring wanderings with Nive Nielsen’s ethereal “Are You Ready” — a song that drifts like cold breath and whispers back at the paths we leave behind.
The late afternoon moon often feels like a reminder — a quiet presence tracing its way across the sky while we trace our own paths below. In its soft light, every line in our hands and every mark on the land seems to carry a story of where we’ve been and where we’re still going. This poem rests inside that moment of reflection, asking what it means to follow the lines that shape our lives.
Tracing the Lines
There you are, all of you, way out there, full and aware – tracing the lines in my hands.
And there are no new brands on the land; every grain of sand still understands.
There’s a crack in everything – in all of you out there, feeling open and bare – tracing the lines in my full glare.
A recently released piece, carrying the same gentle pull of the moon’s slow journey across the sky
Cohen Noir: Celebrating the Music, Words & Legacy of Leonard Cohen
There’s a quiet thrill in the air today — Maree and I have just secured our tickets to Cohen Noir: Celebrating the Music, Words & Legacy of Leonard Cohen, live at the Melbourne Recital Centre on Saturday, 26th September.
It’s only four weeks away, but the mood is already settling in: that velvet‑dark Cohen atmosphere, the poetry, the ache, the humour, the songs that have followed us through decades. To step into a hall shaped for his voice — even through the hands of others — feels like a gift waiting patiently on the horizon.
A wonderful night ahead… and I’m looking forward to sharing the experience with you all.
And as we count down the four short weeks to Cohen Noir, I keep returning to the night we saw Leonard himself in Melbourne back in 2009 — a concert that still hums in the heart. To set the mood, here’s his wonderfully cheeky and soulful Tower of Song, live from London in 2008.