I’m neither here nor there,
Half asleep or half awake.
Not quite conscious,
Like a drifting snowflake.
Sinking through a prism,
Where I fantasize and over-achieve.
Seeing a blond haired vixen,
Thinking I’ve seen her tatt’s before.
I’m retreating, hiding,
From her beckoning embraces.
My drunken mates at the bar,
Giggling and smirking, as if I can’t see.
Between there’s a tattered curtain,
A pale veil, shadows lurking.
A vision frighteningly surreal,
Like a fiery chasm.
The blonds tattoos spasm,
Chasing my body into the surf.
A bubbling sensation, wildly scary,
I sprawl atop the tattoos in the sand.
And I wonder what to do,
With her bloodied tattooed hand,
Wishing I could escape from here or there.
I suddenly awaken, and burst into tears,
Recognising my weakly fears.
Ivor Steven.

Wow! Very chilling imagery. My fears… something to reflect upon.
Powerful! Love it!
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Thanks Mel, I’ve just sent it off to Slasher Monster Magazine to be published in the September Edition, maybe it’ll get in. !!
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Too cool!
Must give us an update on that! Love how cool you are!
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They seem to like my poems that I submit to them. I’ve had two published them so far, “This Lost Shadow” and “Frosted Glass”
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Oooh! I have to catch up!
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I liked this a lot. Thank you!
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Fantastic Ivors. Unlike anything of yours I’ve read before. Very dark and edgy. Nice job!
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Thanks, I had a bit of fun writing it, and that’s half the battle with writing, making yourself smile….
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True true!
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Dark and dank. Wonderful!!
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Oh wonderful, haven’t seen that word “dank” used for ages…….
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Glad you liked it!
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Oh I really like this! Nice work, Ivors! I hope it gets published (saw your comment above!) It deserves to be.
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Wow, Ivor, this is beautifully dark and powerful!
It gripped me completely!
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I like that I gripped you completely !!
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Very powerful Ivor. Well done. Hope it gets published.
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Thanks Peter, I think it will be, SMM seem to like my writings.
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Well that gave me an uncomfortable shiver!!!!!!
Well done if that was the intent! 😉
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Yep, A poem I sent to Slasher Monster Magazine, to hopefully be published in their September Edition. I like the challenge of writing something different….
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You did this well. A little too well….. 😉
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The dark shadows in your poem give me such a thrilling chill, Ivor. We monsters at SMM bow to your bravado! I’d sure like to meet the tattooed blonde.
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The way dresses so cute, you wouldn’t know, and they’re only small tatts,
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I didn’t expect such a tragic ending, but then, we often times can’t control our dreams! We look forward to posting your vivid and compelling words on SMM, dear friend. xo
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Thanks Rose, and yes it was only a crazy mixed up dream, The Tattooed blond is 2 recent girlfriends, the boys at the bar, my drinking mates, the tattered curtain is from my junior football days, and I’ve always been a surfie. so my dream just shuffled them all together……
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I do enjoy hearing about dreams, and what they might mean! Aw, so did your mom teach you how to surf? I remember you telling me she was such a surfie, too.
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I virtually lived on the surf beach all summer, loved it, and mum was always there.
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I was talking about your concrete floor that still needs to be done with my husband, and he said that if your friend is unable to complete it, home improvement or garden stores carry concrete flat slabs (like tiles) you can lay on the ground.
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Haha, I’ll tell my concreter that his non-appearances have become the talking point at many an overseas kitchen table chat…..
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Well, it was more like a bedroom chat! Lol.
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Oh dear, what stuff dreams are made of !!
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😉
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Maybe I was killing one of tattooed blonds off, I’m still quite friendly with the latest blond !!
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Haha! Perhaps — that would be quite the dream, mate!
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I haven’t got your sort of handbag
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Ah, you’re so funny! Thanks for the laughs — you are a unique and lovely man. 🌹
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Not that lovely if I’m killing off one of the tattooed blonds. !!
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Eeeeeek!! 🔪 🏄♀️ 🔫
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A bit of a nightmare
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Not your usual fair, Ivor. Darkly scary and yet so realistic. I am sure this happens quite a lot on nights out, all over the world.
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It was all a dream, but a jumbled mixture of some past realities.
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Left me gripping till the end! Wow!
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A bit of poetic licence used here, my ex-blond-haired girlfriend had a few tatts!! She’s still alive 😆
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Oh well, well!😆
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i like this darker side of your poetry! the images are extremely vivid! what a feeling, also because I have a penchant for tattoos!
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Haha, Ivor has no tattoos. The poem is another one of those dreams, probably about that ex- girl, she had a couple of tatts. 😊
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tatts are cool, i try not to get addicted to it, Ivor magic once again!
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I’ve had a few views from GDGC, which is really cool. 😊 How many tatts have you ❤️
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a lady never reveals age and tatts! I am glad you are getting good traffic to your amazing poems Ivor!
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I’m finding GDGC a lovely venue for me ☺️
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I am glad, it is something very precious to me too. people read and come to your poems because they are very good Ivor.
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I think I’ve said it before , you’re wonderful for my confidence, and a part of the Ivor Poetry Team. xx
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hi Ivor, was a long day, just getting down to reading comments, you are good for me too Ivor, a very sincere and kind friend to me.
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Hi Gina, I’m sitting on the train, going back to Geelong, have been here in Melbourne watching April sing, I’m one proud uncle Ivor xx
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congratulations proud Uncle!!
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I’ll send you a video clip, if I can get it to work 😉🙄
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🙏🌺❤
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Oh and I already know your age… 😆
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yes that you do!
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you for reading, I shall have a look at your site laterer,.. I’m going up to Melbourne to watch my niece sing in an Opera.
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Sounds amazing! You’re welcome and I’m looking forward to seeing you over at my blog when you visit!
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Oh good heavens! You’ve got me beat for weird! Did you ever figure out what the dream was all about, Ivor?
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Oh probably about that ex-girlfriend who had a couple of Tatts, !!!
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