A special thanks to, ~M, Her Writing Haven, she’d just posted her first poem written many years ago, a writing full of feeling and emotion. So she’s managed to prompt me to post my first ever poem, from many many years ago, also full of feeling and emotion. Thanks again to, ~M….
I wake up,
Dreaming words of you.
Falling like the morning dew.
You’ve been resting tonight,
Under white sheets, out of sight.
Once, you were mine to hold,
But no more of being bold.
And no-one’s at fault,
Fate sent you a horrid jolt.
I lie here,
Dreaming words of you,
I hear the flick of your bedside light.
And you softly call my name
You smile at me, a sigh, a wave, Hi.
Hi, I smile at you and sigh.
Tears rolling down from your eyes.
I grimace, shielding my eyes,
Crying again tonight,
The same as last night.
Always, I’m here for you.
Always dreaming words of you.
Ivor Steven.
Speechless.
Knot in my stomach.
Beautiful.
Hands down, this is now my favourite X
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Thanks Maria, I rehashed it a bit from the original, but, haha, you should see me over here, wet tissues all over my desk and on the floor, yep, Knots in my stomach, …….
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Aw Bless you! 🌺
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Superbly poignant and beautifully sad, Ivor
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Thanks Derrick, I appreciated your thoughts.
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This brought tears to my eyes… Such a precious memory. Makes me miss my hubby all the more since he is gone for the time being. All I can do is dream of him now while he’s gone and hope and pray it isn’t forever. And I have to agree with one of the other comments, this is my favorite of yours too.
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Thanks, that was nearly 20 years ago, but the memories are vivid, and her smile everlasting.
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Her smile is everlasting…. think you should write a poem on that one. 😉
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As you know, we both share a life changing memory. Memories are both happy and sad, but they are all we have. They are always with us Ivor, always. God bless you my friend.
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Thanks Walt, I appreciate your kindness
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Oh Ivor…..I just lived that moment very vividly. What a powerful personal share.
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Yep, you’re totally right there … wow I was teary-eyed all the way through the re-write, I’d actually forgotten about those wonderful little moments of knowing gestures between us.
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I’m glad you have words like this to bring them back to life in your memories.
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Wow!! Such a beautiful poem!
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Thankyou for following my blog/website, muchly appreciated, I’m from Geelong, Australia. Cheers. Ivor
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You have an amazing blog! And I am from India. Good day!
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Hope you enjoy my humble writings.
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Oh this made me so emotional. Beautifully written. 💜
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Thanks, written a long time ago, and we were both being emotionally tested, life can be cruel sometimes
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I agree Ivor, life is often cruel and it’s often hard to understand why, but as you now know, eventually we come to terms with what we have lost. Not just a loved one but our lives as we knew it. I can imagine how difficult this one must have been to write. Thank you for sharing Ivor. 🙂
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Life is never fair. It sounds as if you were by your love’s side during the toughest times. Mesmerizing and tragic poetry.
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Thanks D.D , I’m hoping for these melancholic poems to make reader feel like they’re not alone if their experiencing personal pain, we all have our moments of suffering, sooner or later, sorry to say….
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This is so very beautiful, Ivor. Knot in the stomach describes pretty good what your words evoke…
What a wonderful talent you have! 😄
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Thanks, Hope you’re able to untie the knot…
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Do ghosts haunt our thoughts, or do we create the ghosts to keep us company? Gorgeous and haunting words.
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Maybe a bit of both !!
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It´s just amazing, very very touching! Dreaming words is a dreamlike poem with a wonderful title!
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Thanks Anie, A lot of my poem titles have the word “Dream” in them, truly because most of my poems originate through my dreams. Always appreciating your comments
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I´m happy about this!
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I’m lost for words..
This is amazing *__*
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Thankyou, as i was trying to explain, these words were written for myself, and I was happy with what I wrote. Mostly I write unabridged feelings from my heart.
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You’re an inspiration sir! Truly!
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Such a beautiful, melancholic poem. Thank you so much for linking me to it, Ivor.
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Thank you Paul, for reading and for your thoughtful words.
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One year is gone but maybe some things perhaps never change… ?
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You’re right Anie, some things will never change, and for me it feels OK. 😊
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I am glad, that this feels o.k. for you Ivor!
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I’m comfortable within myself, I think that’s the main thing 😊
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Yes you are right!
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