Below A Loyal Sky

I hide behind a mask
You’ll hear me ask

At the local veil sales

Lurking in the back pews

Sneaking a view

From under a curtain of blue

Indigo-blue, below a loyal sky

Protecting alien spy eyes

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Ivor Steven (c)  2018

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

30 thoughts on “Below A Loyal Sky”

    1. Photograph and poem match perfectly. At first sight, just looking at the photo made me think of Lawrence of Arabia. The poem is very nice and has a delicious air of mystery.

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    1. We’ll I’m back from work, I’ve been rained out this afternoon, and it’s only a cold 9’C here. Your comments are spot on, as I was trying to creat that mystical touch to my “alien eyes”, that was nearly going to be the Title, but I think “Below A Loyal Sky” left more up the the readers imagination.

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      2. Yep, too cold and wet for the plumber, and now I’m back from my Writers group meeting, and the the poets going to do some writing tonight, I’ve a nice draft nearly finished, I’ll publish in the morning, another one in my “Help The Children” series. xx

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  6. This is excellent and leaves me wanting to know more!!!

    Oh! Indigo blue has always been a favorite colour of mine! Your poem and photos are a perfect combo! The visuals in all of them are vivid and memorable!

    How are you doing today, Ivor?
    I hope it’s a great day!
    HUGS!!! 🙂

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    1. I appreciate your colourful comments, Haha there’s no more, I got stuck with the finish, sometime my idea is just a small one, and I don’t like to expand out of my central thought . so my poem comes out cout concise and mysterious.
      I’m ok but it’s cold gloomy and wet here again today, ..3’C brrrr

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    1. Thanks Sue, it’s the “Dr Who” side of me coming out, this is what happens if you let your grand- kids watch Sci-fi for the next 55 years, hehehe, they’ll end up like Ivor with his Alien Eyes.

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