I’ve visions of Vikings sailing in the cold
Plundering distant hearts and pilfering gold
I’m dreaming of the old farmer’s wife
Milking cows, cleaning and baking for life
I’ve feelings for the king, in his isolated castle
Looking forlornly upon his drawbridge, a foodless trestle
I’m wandering through an empty paddock
Kicking dew off the grass, searching for a lovers locket
I’ve plans for the planets desolate future
Growing purple tomatoe ferns until they’re mature
I’m following her brave journey’s every mile
Climbing over dying garden beds and rotting fence stiles
I’ve finished falling under broken skies
Claiming peace amongst tomorrows butterflies
https://youtu.be/V8Daxz3Gbrc
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ivor20
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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love love the last 2 lines Ivor, we all have dreams, some not so realistic but they are our dreams, yet we must live in the present, so those last two lines are incredibly precious
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The poem was my last nights dream, and It seemed to make sense, o I wrote it down, 4.30am.. !!
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i had a funny dream last night, and funny for many reasons, mainly because I seldom dream, maybe my third this year – odd. your dreams generate some amazing lines!
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Oh, I learnt/trained myself to jot down what I’m dreaming about as soon as I can, those subconscious though disappear so quickly.
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they do, I never remember fully, even if i have pen and paper by my side it;s all so fuzzy
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My pc is blinking at me again !! I’m going to leave it on, while I’m at my poetry group today, oh I must have breakfast and get ready. Catch you laterer. xx
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m up and blink away! have a sweet day Ivor, ttyl!!
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The last line is epic Ivor….i am dreamer myself…some may seemed to be so unrealistic but who cares? Its my dream to dream right?..what i am saying is this poems is just yelling dreams….dreams of far and above; of way and beyond
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Thank you Mich, yes it was a vivid dream, and now I’ve read it a few times, it’s quite a metaphorical poem, as I’m piece together what my dream was about, and most of the words are about what I’ve been writing about lately, …
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“Kicking dew off the grass”. Ivor, that is a familiar image. I love it. Just the simplicity of it that hasn’t been spoken yet. Lovely.
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I thought you’d like that one Colleen, we don’t hear a lot of those old time phrases these days, I so hope they don’t get gobbled up in all this modern technology and digital writing of today. I so glad I still write with a pencil. š š ā¤ļø
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I carry so many notebooks with me. I love pen to paper, always will. š
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Another good one Ivor! Love the music clip, I looked at Maureen Lipman and wondered why she was there , she’s out of place. Then I realised it was a radio studio and when I heard the voice of Chris Evans the penny dropped, that’s my favourite Radio 2 slot. I thank you
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I’m not sure when the clip was done, but they’re all fairly olderer, so it’s probably only a few years ago. And of course their “Purple Rain” was appropriate for my “purple tomato fern” , (there’s no such thing)
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There may be no such thing but I think someone should breed one just for you Ivor!
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Yes they should, such a great name for a fern, and a great song to go with the name.
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Lovely how you can translate dreams into poems.
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Reading this is like walking through your dream š
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The word-pictures you paint in this poem are masterpieces, Ivor! š
You take us, the readers, right along with you in your dreams! š
HUGS!!! š
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Thank you Carolyn, sometimes my dreams make sense.
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I understand! Often mine do, too!
Then there are those that are wild! š® And I think I should have been writing those down to turn into stories! š
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Oh yes, jot those wild ones down, they make for interesting poems. hmmm, I’ll find you one… or two… of my wild dreams
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2017/08/31/burning-the-fears/
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2018/01/06/arctic-winds-3/
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Excellent, my friend.
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I like excellent š
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My, my, my Ivor! What a wonderful poem with such brilliant.images and thoughts! And my word, what a wonderful rendition of Purple Rain! These guys are truky awesome my friend. I loved watching the keyboard player, and the drummer could have been me, except he still has hair, lol. Thanks for sharing it!
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Thanks Walt, one of those dreamy poem’s from Ivor, and next time I watch the clip I will imagine that the drummer is you. š
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With hair, lol?
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Isn’t there a beauty in abstractness? The poem invokes so many different images š Loved it.
And I so glad to have chanced upon your blog š
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A lot of my abstract poems emanate from my dreams, where I wake up in the middle of the night and jot down the main items of my dream, and then I expand on them in the morning. Another example is this one
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2018/03/10/rabbit-stew-and-broken-plates/
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That’s amazing! Indeed dreams weave an uncanny magic and you are conjuring magic for us by penning them down in the form of verses that I undoubtedly know everybody loves to read. š
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Thanks, it takes some time to get the knack of writing from your subconscious while only half awake. š
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I agree š
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