My curtains were opened
I saw a setting eclipse
And I decided to walk
To the south side of the moon
Taking my own spoon
I heard there’s a cheese-cake tasting
A sweet crumbly base
Topped with blueberries and cream
Life’s not about lying in bed
I’ll meet you for a kiss
After school
Down by the old pool
Ivor Steven (c) 2018
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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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but bed rest it is until you fully recover … no meeting those nice nurses for kisses …
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A kiss on the foread, is always good for you 😆 😇 😊
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lol don’t you distract them from their job 😉
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I agree with Kate. You take it easy please 🙂
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Please tell me my poem is ok, send me some kisses, and hugs, I’m resting non-stop, from dawn til dust, as for my night time, they’re awful 😕😇😞
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Ivor, your poem is lovely. All your poems are really wonderful. I run out of comments because I’ve said it all before. You are such a great poet.
You know I love you to bits, so massive hugs and kisses are sent to you. plus… check your e-mail.
My bedtime now, but as it’s your day I’m hoping you’ll have plenty going on around you. Night night from me xxx
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Thank dear Sue, all hugs and kisses accepted gleefully. 😊 😊 ❤️
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Beautiful poem, get better.<3
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Thank you ❤️ dearest Laleh, I’m still unwell and not much fun to chat to 😊🙄😇
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Awwwww, so sorry.<3
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love the old world charm of this poem Ivor, only you can do this, make me nostalgic for the era of courtship and stolen kisses. I hope the poem you write has cheered you up as much as it has me today.
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I was determined to cheer myself up, and dear Gina your grand praise has indeed made me smile. 😊 😊 ❤️
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I am happy that your mind is moving towards strong positive thoughts. you are an amazing soul Ivor, I am quite out of words to describe how amazing you are.
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It works both ways Gina , you are simply amazing.
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aww…thank you! going to get out a glazed doughnut to celebrate now. I was bad, I had doughnuts for dinner and now having them for breakfast too!
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Good girl Gina, treat yourself to a treat, and enjoy ☺️😊
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Love the simple and romantic vibe of this poem Ivor..but i suppose as what everybody here is saying go back to bed and rest..lol
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Yep, I’m in bed and resting
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Going for a munch of cheese on the moon sounds wonderful! Dream it, Ivor. It must have magical healthgiving properties – ‘cos, the moon. Hugs and blessings x
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Ivor the night is for the rest as we are on the mend
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All night, all day I’m here to stay
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Refreshed some memories in my mind!❤️
Get well soon Ivor. You need to meet someone down the pool soon😛
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OH! This is one of your best poems ever! It is so sweet! It has vivid word-pics! It has good emotions! It brings joy and smiles and memories…such warmth on this cold night. 🙂
There you are…so ill and in bed 😦 …and you are making all of us feel better! 🙂 Thank you, Ivor! 🙂
I know hearing “rest now” a million times…and having to stay in bed…can be so boring and tiring. Ugh. But, do what ya’ gotta’ do to get well! 🙂
That photo is amazing! I almost get dizzy looking at it! Ha! 😀 It reminds me of when I visited the giant redwood trees. Know what? I even hugged a few trees! 🙂
HUGS for you, too!!! 🙂
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Yes. Carolyn, this is a glorious huggy poem and full of warmth and joy, and I didn’t want to elaborate any further.
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I’m smiling more than yesterday, your summation brought joy to my soul 😊 thank you for your kind words ❤️ 🤗
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Ahhh this poem is so sweet and charming, it just made me feel good to read it. Hope you feel better soon Ivor – big hugs on way :O) xxx
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Yes it was a goodie feel poem. But I’m feeling terrible.
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I’m so sorry to hear that my friend. Try to rest and concentrate on getting yourself well again xx
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Beautiful poem!! Collect some force in some wonderful dreams and when you are healthy again you can put on your shoes and walk your dreams!
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Thank you ❤️ Anie
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Those musings are the best kind of bed rest
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I’m hoping that they are 😊😞🤔
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Feel good all round. Hope you will be soon too!
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Thanks again mate 😉
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Those last lines Ivor!!!! ❤
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Yes !! And I love the nostalgia behind my words 😊😊xxx
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I love lying in bed but I know life can’t be lived from there. Gorgeous poem!
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Love this one.
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Thank you ❤️ Sue, yes it’s a lovely old style nostalgia romantic poem, and I’m very pleased you enjoyed my words
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Your poem is delicious
And the song is too good
Ivor, so happy to see
You are recovering, touch wood!
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Oh, lovely to hear from you Dear Punam xx
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Sorry for the delay, I have been busy lately.
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And I’m reading no blogs/post, it’s all too hard on my phone. I’m so tired and unable to concentrate. 😊
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Don’t strain your eyes and take care. Hugs. 🤗🤗
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Warm and cozy words. They come together to show a wonderful love drenched day.
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