Oh baby, I’m tired of watching
You drive my car
The wheels are on fire
Beyond the grip of my sweaty palms
Whenever, is my burn-out time due
Behind the old steering wheel
Before I finally run-out of fuel
Driving on my road, with no rear-vision view
A new license to live, and be beside you
I’m sorry, I’ve not been to see you, I’ll be there soon
Ivor Steven (c) 2019
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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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A fantastic cover!
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Yes… I happen upon it when I is searching for the old Beatles song, and I do like good versions of the original songs, and this is definitely a good one !!
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“The wheels are on fire
Beyond the grip of my sweaty palms”
I love this!!
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Oh I love those sort of comments, xx
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😊😊
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Most poignant
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I think this is the first time I’ve heard a cover of this. I love it!
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Yes, it’s a great cover Colleen
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Love the car metaphor in this poem.
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Love your poem and I love the song. Never heard of the girls but the song I obviously know.🙂
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They do a great version.
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Fabulous
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Thank you Rajani
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Wonderful, Ivor! All 3…your photo, your poem, the song/vid are emotion grabbing! Love all 3!
HUGS!!! 🙂
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Yes I’m feeling emotional at the moment. I have been bed this afternoon, bad headache again and the cold shivers, I hope I wake up feeling betterer in the morning. The last thing I need is another set back
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😦 😦 😦
I continue to keep you in my thoughts and prayers, Ivor!
(((HUGS)))
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I’m doing ok, and getting spoilt, I’m a happy familiar face.
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If they don’t let you out soon…give me a holler and I’ll come and help you escape! 😉 😛
More HUGS!!! 🙂
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I’m only here a couple of days, and I’m doing ok
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