I’d like to thank Gina, of Singledust, for reminding me of an old poem of mine. Her glorious poem, “dying dreams” inspired me to write an answer to my poem “A Crack In The Wall”.
Cracks Fading Into DustΒ
Long ago, I lay bruised, on a pebble beach
The jagged rocks, had cut me deeply
I remained, bleeding and afraid
Beached, unable to row with my torn pieces
The cracks sharp edges, are now blunt
Ancient dark chasms, softened by time
And filled with yesteryear’s tears
Light ascends from the opaque holes
And glowing lustre, hovers over old fears
I see clear visions beyond the front door
And distant dreams, becoming realities
I’m done, hurdling fences and stone walls
The lifelong barriers are turning into dust
And her lost love, will be my last supper
Leonardo’s Bride – Lyrics. Even when I’m Sleeping
Ivor Steven (c)Β 2019

Another powerful one
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Thank you Derrick, I’m pleased you enjoyed my words,
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Beautifully sad.
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Thank you Claudia, I was hoping my words not to be too sad. ππ
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Your words are more often than not melancholy sad, but that’s alright. Thats who you are and I like you alot!
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I’m blushing now, thank you Claudia. ((Hugs))
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Poignant and well expressed Ivor. I read her poem, easy to see how you were inspired by it.
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I follow her writing’s avidly, her gentle nature shines through her words
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It certainly does.
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Marvelous!! as always!
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Thank you Efi, and I hope you liked the song too.
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Good morning from Athens!!! This song brings back so many memories!!!!!
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Yes… I always cry….
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ΞΞΏ tears .. please!!! Send you a large ((((((((HUG))))))!!
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I’m emotional….. that’s me .. ((Hugs))
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Welcome to the club lol!!!!
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It makes me feel true to myself,… if that’s how I feel at the moment….. and I feel the meaning of what I’m hearing and seeing
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Ξ can understand you Ivor because i feel the same!! The only difference is that i can not express it with poems….. Kisses!!!!!
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Emotional Kisses !!! and Hugs!!! will do me fine
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A lovely duo again Ivor!
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Thanks Peter, And I’ve just added the lyrics of the song, which are quite beautiful.
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powerful and very healing, love it Ivor!
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Thanks Kate, Gina helped me stir up the words and write the poem, which I think came out ok…….
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they came out beautifully, good for you!
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Strong Ivor, it feels empowering in its recognition of life.
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Yes, a story of life’s downs and ups
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This is a great piece Ivor.
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Thank you Colleen, funny how some pieces are easier to write than others
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I understand that!
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From raw pain to healing . It’s what makes us humans – and better poets.
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Accurately accessed V.J., thank you
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Very welcome, Ivor.
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Deep and heartfelt!β€οΈ
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Beautiful, powerful, poignant, Ivor! And with photo and song…a perfect trio!
It’s important to take time to honor the cracks/scars because they show that we have lived, loved, survived and will thrive.
HUGS!!! π
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Beautifully said Carolyn, my poem goes through all those events and associated emotions ((Hugs)), and the song is a superb….xxx
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So beautiful Ivor, I wouldn’t have expected anything less.
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I was happy with this piece Sue, words of my emotional journey over time,
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I met you when you had been blogging just a couple of months and last night I was thinking about how sad your poems used to be back then. You lived in your past and wrote so much about Carole. Many of them seemed to be almost a cry for help.
Today despite months of illness your poems are about hope and determination and are so much happier. Youβve come a long way Ivor. π xx
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Yes I’m definitely happier within myself, despite my health setbacks. I’m enjoying what I’m doing and a few life long dreams are coming true πππ€
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I am pleased for you
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I think weβve both come a long way in the last couple of years!
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Yes, you are quite right, and you’ve been such a good friend to me.
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And you to me Ivor π
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Another reason I’m happier π
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