On a starry Autumn night
Laying under the cosmic sky
I see a universe beyond
The galaxy’s, milky way
With unnumbered orbiting planets
Astronomer’s, clearly hearing their sound
Radars that echo, there’s no shadow of doubt
Out there somewhere
In the vastness of space
Another similar earth, co-exists
Do those purple aliens
Wait and wonder
Look to the cosmos and ponder
When will humanity arrive
Invading their picturesque, violet atmosphere
Ravaging innocent foreign lives
Bowing to the human war cry
Assimilate or die
“Melancholy Man” The Moody Blues
All the world surrounds me, and my feet are on the ground.
I’m a very lonely man, doing what I can,
All the world astounds me and I think I understand
That we’re going to keep growing, wait and see.When all the stars are falling down
Into the sea and on the ground,
And angry voices carry on the wind,
A beam of light will fill your head
And you’ll remember what’s been said
By all the good men this world’s ever known.
Another man is what you’ll see,
Who looks like you and looks like me,
And yet somehow he will not feel the same,
His life caught up in misery, he doesn’t think like you and me,
‘Cause he can’t see what you and I can see
Ivor Steven (c) 2019
A scary thought! Love the music, a lesser known song of one of my favourite groups.
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Life is scary sometimes, haha, a song I used to play a lot, the tune and words seem to be right for my poem……
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your autumn sky must be nothing short of spectacular to invoke these feelings Ivor, I felt you floating away, come back to earth ok, we all need you here!
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Some nights and sensational here, sitting under my verandah…. my mind does tend to wander into the great beyond…..
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you must have less light pollution there at night, here i can hardly see the satellites…LOL
your musings are sublime Ivor
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Oh Gina, always your lovely comments, bring warmth to my heart…
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and the same to you too my dear friend, you always make me smile, no matter how rotten I am feeling!
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Our smiles are mutual….xx
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💕🙏😊🤗
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very melancholic and surreal poem Ivor!
You will see a very different night sky when you fly north 🙂
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I’m looking forward to surreal and the fascinating new real 😁🤗
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good for you 🙂
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Do not have melancholia you will see new places, new customs, new members of family, new friends… in a while!!!
SMILE MY FRIEND !!!!!!!!!!!
We all wait for all these news to be shared with us!!!
Kisses!!!!
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Thank you, I used love that song years ago 🎶🎶❤️😁
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Beautifully done with great starry imagery!!
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Thanks Fiery… feeling Cosmic… !!
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Love it! Reach for the stars xx
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20 days til take-off time, xxx
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I hope you are fine, Ivor. This is melancholic but nice song!
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Intriguing thought Ivor! Wonder what they would say if we met them…
Beautiful poem as ever!
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Thank you Mona,. I’m always wondering and pondering. 😃🤔
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Good to hear from you… and congratulations, once again, on your 1000 followers!
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Excellent! An amazing poem with powerful images and emotions, Ivor! I always tease that I’m an alien and I’m waiting for The Mothership to come pick me up. But, there is some truth in there. Sometimes with what is going on on Earth…I feel like I don’t fit in here. 😦
I think the aliens would be kinder to us than human-beans would be to them. ???
I hope when you look at the stars and moon you, also, see beauty and find healing! I know I do! 🙂
OOH! I love The Moody Blues! 🙂
HUGS!!!
🙂 👽 🙂 👽 🙂
PS…what is the countdown # now?!?!?!
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Haha 20 days !! but who’s counting …… Yes, us humans have a lot learn yet !! the song is one I played a lot when I was young !!!
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HA! You’re counting, I’m sure! 🙂
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I’m learning to count again 😁🤗
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The days will pass and soon you will only need some fingers and toes to count on! Ha! 😉 😀
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Yes, the day’s are going quickly, the nights are getting longer though
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OH!
PS….I shared two of my poems on my post yesterday! 🙂
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I shall go and have a look this afternoon, when I get back from rehab session…. xxxx
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Okie dokie! 🙂
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Cosmic Cowboy comes to mind Ivor.
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I love the nighttime sky, & gazing out wondering if there’s anything else living out there..you painted my picture! Love “Melancholy Man” by The Moodies..takes me back to my teenage years, playing “This Is The Moody Blues” over & over, with those fabulous poems linking the tracks.
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Thank you Debbie, yes, I used to play “Melancholy Man” over and over back in younger days/daze !! the lyrics amazed me back then, and seem so appropriate for my poem now !!
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It definitely does..”Another man is what you’ll see,
Who looks like you and looks like me” I wonder if they will..maybe one day we’ll know.
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I always wonder too… the alein in me gets a big mention in many of my poems, especially while I was in hospital feeling disorientated ….. Here’s an example..
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/2019/03/31/itims-ivors-time-machine-inside-micro-space/
If you are interested I could send you my Tullawalla Booklet, I wrote while I was in hospital, called “The Healing Castle” about 40 poems !!
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It must be so tough being ill and in solitary & for all that time. Maybe the dreams were your brain’s way of sending you that escapism you needed to help wipe out some of the unpleasantness. However, now you can look back, they were a marvellous gift for your poetry..what a journey you took yourself on..incredible! (Great version of Phantom too, btw) I would love to read your Tullawalla Booklet, Ivor..how lovely..thank you! You must tell me what I owe you, & how to send it to you.
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Oh that’s so kind of you Debbie, any monies I make go to the MS Society of Victoria… I have a Paypal account, that you pay into…
Haha ..I’ve written 9 Tullawalla Booklets, plus a Booklet of my published poems…… I’ll have to slow down !!,…. and they are all about making donations for the MS society……
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Aww, that’s fantastic, great cause..& goodness, that’s a lot of writing haha! Good for you! Maybe I’ll publish one, someday, that would be a triumph!😂
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I’ve sent you a message via your your contacts on your blog.
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Brilliant, thanks Ivor, I’ll look now 😊
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I hope it all comes through for you, please let me Know….I’m so pleased you are donating for one of my booklets….. I starting writing about 18 years ago, after my first stroke. as a form of rehab to help me read and write again, and for some quirky reason, my words started to fall into poetry lines, and I’ve enjoyed writing my poems ever since….
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It all came through fine, thank you, Ivor, I’m really looking forward reading them all, & I’m glad to help a good cause! Sorry, for not getting back to you earlier, we had the family here over the weekend, so I needed to slope off to bed last night & was catching up/tidying up today. What a fantastic way to help you regain & retrain your brain, though writing really does make you think & gives it a great workout! It’s also brilliant to turn a negative situation into a positive one..well done you! 😊
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Oh that’s great you got my booklet Debbie and thank you for your kind words…. Haha, it was a matter of having to make myself come good, I was still caring for Carole at home the same time !!
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Goodness, life threw the book at you, Ivor, which was so unfair! 😦
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Whoops re my Paypal account…
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The poem echoes thoughts my sister often shares with me.
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Thank you Rose, it’s nice to know that I’m not alone with my thoughts. 😊🤔
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