Hi Kiddo’s, I hope you will read this
I’m home now, feeling out of control
Happy, and half intoxicated
I think, I fell over on the dance floor
That’s Ok, you helped me, and picked me up
You young girls didn’t know where I’d been
The kid’s didn’t understand
They were dancing
With a resurrected, ancient man
Who had walked on water
They couldn’t comprehend
An old man’s joy
O being alive, and travelling
Nor read my mind beyond
Fifth Avenue
Too young to see,
Life, is a whirlpool
Of floods and droughts
Empty deserts and doubts
I Love this video and song by Jake Bugg .. ..enjoy ……
Ivor Steven (c) 2019
Ivor.Plumber/Poet 
A good night then!
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Haha, I’ll find out when I wake up in the morning
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Fabulous
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That’s What happens Saturday nights
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Life, is a whirlpool Of floods and droughts And deserts and doubts
Brilliant! Bravo Ivor!
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Thank you Dear Walt, a few late night words of wisdom
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Late night words are often the best! You’re very welcome Ivor 🙂✍🏼
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Nothing like growing old outrageously 😇🕶️
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l’ll let you know
In the morning
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Nothing better than growing old outrageously I say😉😎
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I was definitely outrageous
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❤️
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At least, about that I have no doubt, Ivor 😎
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Thank 🍺🍺🍺🍺🍺you
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You’re very 🍾 welcome 🥂
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Why grow old gracefully, when you can do it disgracefully?! Go you, Ivor..sounds like you danced the kids under the table..literally! 😁
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I was a slow moving dancer, but definitely had a fun time. Tired today!!! I’ll have to spark up, My brother and sister are coming down from Ballarat, ti take me out for lunch, a “bon voyage” get together
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I was a slow moving dancer, but definitely had a fun time. Tired today!!! I’ll have to spark up, My brother and sister are coming down from Ballarat, ti take me out for lunch, a “bon voyage” get together.
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Haha! As long as you had fun, you can’t rush a good thing! Have a great time with your brother & sister..I’m sure you’ll perk up, once they’ve arrived!
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Haha, I’ve had brekkie…. I think I’ll be fine.. a few gentle exercises, and a nice long shower, and I’ll be as good as it gets, for the day ahead….
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lol do hope you pull up ok this morning … you party boy!
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I was a slow moving dancer, but definitely had a fun time. Tired today!!! I’ll have to spark up, My brother and sister are coming down from Ballarat, ti take me out for lunch, a “bon voyage” get together.
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Not surprised with so much dancing! But good for you, enjoy 🙂
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There’s no alternative, Ortensia,
for the young at heart 💓 and
the infectiously courageous 😎
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love this poem, especially the last two lines.
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It’s all in the fun !
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Certainly a fun day and night,
Ivor was in flight 🛫🛫
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Let me know how you are feeling in the morning!! I am sure you will fly .. i am sure!! Kisses!!!!
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sounds like you had a fab time….well done Ivor!
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Yes, a great time
I enjoyed myself day and night
Ivor was in full flight …. xx
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your fb-link did not work for me….but now I am here…wonderful, that you are fine again!!!! And this song is amazing!!!! Thank you for sharing…have a nice Sunday!!! Big warm hug!
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Thank you Anie, yes It was a fun day, And I think good for me to get out interact with a large crowd…. xx
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So happy for you Ivor – your joy comes through in this poem! Absolutely love the song too – already downloaded and added to my ‘I’m feeling a bit sad’ playlist :O) x
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Yes, an interesting poem, I wrote straight after i got home from my fun day/evening out… a bit drunk !!… I posted it before I went to bed…. and waking in the morning, I left words as there appeared last night…..
The song is one of my favourites….. xx
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Nothing wrong with mild intoxication ;O) xx
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It made for an insightful poem !!
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HA! I love this! And I’m so happy for you! 😀 You were due for a night of WOW! 😉 😀
I must say, that photo is the epitome of joy to me! 🙂
HUGS!!! 🙂
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Oh that photo is a joyous one 💙. My Hanging Violet plant, our wedding flower was violets
It was good for me to get out and interact with a large crowd
Haha, tired today.. 😊😉
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Wonderful
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Thanks Derrick, I’d had enough beers to be sound asleep by then, but show I still wanted to write the words before I nodded off …
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Love the tone of the poem 😀 Both the beginning and end are great!!
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If we can bring ourselves to write while we’re tired and stupid, the words might be a bit abstract, but found there were some good thought in my subconscious mind…xx
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Haha! :D:D It was some great reading Ivor.
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Oh I won’t make a habit of it though, the old head was definitely sore in the morning… !!!
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Absolutely!!
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Haha…Lol !!
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