Dear readers and followers, thank you to everyone who diligently read my post, asking for help to choose 2 poems out of the 5 poems I had selected/presented. Your collective imput and help has been fantastic, give yourselves a big pat on the back. The poem ‘My Rainbow’ was by far the most popular, and easy for me to pick as my first submission. The second selection was a much closer affair, and with me as the author, having the deciding vote, the poem ‘Leafless Branches’ is my second submission. Again thank you all for your interest and involvement. I hope you all enjoyed the process as much as I did… Now it’s all up to the judges, to see if my two submissions are selected for the ‘Geelong Writers Anthology 2019’…..
My Rainbow
Over mountains, over a distant sky
Blazing hues of African butterflies
Sparkling reflections of our last goodbyes
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Did you see my yesterday rainbow
Sheβs ruby red, yellow and blue
The heavenly ring, in everyoneβs view
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Above you, a perfect archway
Behind you, a forever shining sun-ray
Around you, a golden halo everyday
Thereβs a warning sign swirling in my yard
Words are being splattered on my fence
Blown in by todayβs gale
Leafless branches are flying around
Natureβs own, final count down
Suddenly, on the horizon, thereβs a red-brown cloud
Rolling in, over the barren hills
And a dust-storm quickly engulfs the air
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Racing silver clouds and blue sky
Invisible through the thick red haze
Dry topsoil from the western plains
Aerially transported by the windβs angry throat
And thereβs no calming the dusty tempest
Until mother nature has had her way
I stand here, leaning against her force
Feeling her violence, pitch dirt in my face
Ivor Steven (c)Β 2019
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Good choices Ivor!
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Oh, I hope so Kate, My Rainbow, is a gentle evolving poem, contrasting with the violence of a dust storm, of Leafless Branches… hopefully they’ll be selected… could a nice surprise me when I get back… xx
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lol your poems are always selected Ivor, can’t go wrong!
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Oh, I need you for a judge π π
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Congrats!!!!! π€
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Well done Ivor
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Thank you…
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I liked them all so I sat on the fence, Ivor π
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The top of my fence in good
A great view over Corio Bay
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May even see a whale π
But as Humpty Dumpty abruptly found out,
sitting on the fence can get dramatically
uncomfortable after a while π
But ‘My Rainbow’ and ‘Leafless Branches’
were an excellent choice π
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The multitude had their say
Poems written near the bay
Content, I’ll await for judgement day
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Best of Brexit Luck, Ivor π
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I wish you luck. These are both good choices for submission.
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yes, picked by popular demand !!
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Good luck my friend Ivor!!! You have won the prize of all of us so you must feel winner !!!
Have a nice week!!!!
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Oh Efi, sorry I’ve not around too much over Easter, life is busy for me, packing and preparing for trip, π«π«π
((Hugs and kisses from Geelong))
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I βve come to so look forward to your travelling photos and stories from there!! Love you!!!
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YAY!! And bestest of luck!!! π
HUGS!!!
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We need some kind judges Carolyn, thank you for your kind enthusiasm πππ€π
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OH! I hope they are kind in their judging!
But, I know they will enjoy your poems!
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Yes, and maybe It’ll be a nice surprise when I get back from my trip…. Haha, 24 hours to go …. but who’s counting…… !!
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Any choice would have been great ππ
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Thank you Ortensia, you’re very kind to me πππ
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Because you deserve itπ
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These beautiful poems are lovely submissions…as I read them, I could vividly see the rainbows and words being splattered on your fence…I’m so glad I stopped by!
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Great choices, Ivor..glad to have been a part of it, & good luck! π€π
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Thank you Debbie !!! I hope you enjoyed the fun… Haha, my going away poem, i’m posting now……
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