I stand here, in a rain filled pond
Leaning against the icy wind
Glazed eyes and I shiver
My boots are stuck in the muddy river
Ankle deep, in a chilly slush
Sheet ice numbing my toes
When will they finish my lane
Tired of walking through cold drains
The tadpoles are thriving again
Multiplying with the continual rain
My clothes are wet and stained
Walking beyond the puddles is a strain
These house-bound reins feel like chains
It’s time to defrost my frozen brain
Allow my pen to write within this frigid membrane
And tell the world, about life’s warm champagne
Ivor Steven (c) 2019
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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you for reading and commenting 🤗
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You are welcome 🙂
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Ah! Your words flow like champagne, Ivor.
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Thank you Punam, maybe I was drinking the champagne, hic,,.. 🍾
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Enjoy yourself ..😀
You are welcome.
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You’re having some pretty wild weather down under it seems!
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It’s been a rough start to winter, haha, but plenty of time for writing, being stuck indoors …..
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🥂Cheers Ivor! A toast will go well with that champagne.
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A better day today… The champagne is already working !!
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Wow! Your words are always so visually descriptive! And warm champagne in an icy pond? Who would’ve thunk it? Or drunk it? 😉🍾
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Lovely , I enjoyed your comments, yes I think i have a unusual imagination !!
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I was trying to open your site to reply to Kittens article, but it wouldn’t work for me…
So here’s my my reply to your Photos..
Hopefully you can open this link from one friends on Instagram,https://instagram.com/p/ByTZBybiUE3/ Her little character Violet is cute…. I’m dancing to this song now
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That’s adorable!!! Ty!
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Lovely poem Ivor! So sorry about the weather! 🙂
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Oh there was plenty of poetic license in my over exaggeration of the rain !!. looks like no more rain for the next 7 days…. But the farmers are definitely enjoying the “warm champagne”, it’s been so dry for a long time time……
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Lovely imagery
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Thank you Derrick, and the farmers are Bathing in warm champagne
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Goodness, I’m surprised to hear how cold it sounds there, Ivor! I guess it’s because it’s supposed to be warming up here, so seems stranger. Although, heavy rain is on the forecast for the next few days! Maybe you need to send some of that warm champers over here haha! 😁
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The rain has now stopped and we’re in for a mild week ahead ….. It was such a contrast after coming from a warm Philadelphia , 32’C
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Ooh that’s some change! Glad the rain stopped at last, & is going to improve for you. We’ve had some very heavy rain today, until about 6.30pm, then lots of mist rolling in this evening, when I eventually went for my walk. Very ethereal, but beautiful!
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I’ve sent you a comment about your brilliant D-Day poem xx
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ouch I thought this post was about US but I’ve realised it’s about Geelong .. you’ve come home to a cold wet winter 😦
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Yes,, It’s raining again today, the is the farmers warm champagne….
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yes they need it but sounds like it’s doing your head in 🙂
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Oh, it’s just keeping me studio…. so I’ve written another poem
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great way to spend the time, and don’t neglect yorkie!
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Oh Yorkie has been very neglected, But I think my desire to keep fit are starting to return….. x
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get on your bike young man!
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I Shall……
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