A sincere thank you to Fae Corps Publishing for posting my poem here on their fabulous site and for being kindly supportive of writings…
September Footprints Mirror by Ivor Steven
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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20

nice poem, Ivor, and congrats
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Thank you Beth, The poem is in response to Fae Corps Publishing prompt, And then they are publishing it on there site, and I’m enjoying their generous support of my writings…. xx
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Congratulations on another acceptance of a good poem
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Thank you Derrick, The poem is in response to Fae Corps Publishing prompt, And then they are publishing it on there site, and I’m enjoying their generous support of my writings…. xx
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Congratulations! That’s wonderful!! And what a profound poem. Makes all of us stop and think a bit, I’d wager.
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Thank you Rose, like a mini self portrait xx
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Love it!
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That’s great Ivor. It is a perfect RAP but I’m not going to sing it for you!
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I’m happy for you to sing me a song 🎶🤗
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Congrats Ivor.
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Thank you dear Arlene 🤗
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This is very poignant, Ivor. I think a lot of us wonder how far we want to take writing and pour over the why we do things the way we do, is it enough, etc. I love how this started out almost in questioning yourself as a writer and morphed into a progressive self acceptance. When looking into mirrors, we tend to scrutinize before accepting and then seeing some good. Well done.
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I really like your comments, the are correct in what I was trying to say in my poem, and I didn’t want to story to be too self analytical, yes, a touch of, humour, and in the mirror, I saw my dad.. and then I reflected on my life. Thank you Luna 🤗🤗💛
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Of course! You did an excellent job taking the reader where you needed them to go. 🖤
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Thank you Luna, most of my poems, I like to have the come into my imaginary world 🌍🤗🎶
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Oh, Ivor this is lovely! 🙂
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Thank you Sue, it’s amazing who you see in a mirror 😊👀🤗
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I often glimpse my mother!
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🤗😊💛
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Congrats, Ivor! This is one of your bestest poems! You are SO much like your Dad and I know he is ever so very proud of you! He’s with you AND watching over you! 🙂
You express yourself so beautifully in poems…but if you did give a bigger writing a go…you’d do well with that, too! 🙂
Your poems are filled with wisdom, honesty, heart-felt emotions, encouragement, etc! They are so relatable! 🙂
I know life’s been tough on you…but each and every day I do wish you to have more glad than sad. 🙂
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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Oh Carolyn your beautiful words bring tears to my eyes… because that’s the way i am…… xxx
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PS…I popped over to the site to read your poem again and thank them for sharing it! 🙂
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Thank you for supporting my writings, and for commenting at Fae Corps Publishing, they have have been very kind to me…xx
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Beautiful poem, Ivor, and congratulations! 😊
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Thank you Eugenia 💙👀
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