Another older poem from last year, and quaintly appropriate for this historical gold-mining town of Ballarat
My Kite And Bike
Here I am in this ancient town
Climbing the local mystical Blue Mountains
Standing in the world’s greenest paddock
Flying my yellow and purple kite
On that old magical golden thread
My kite is soaring higher and higher
Towards our planet’s crimson sky
A sky covered by the clouds rainbow hues
Creamy clouds, opaque, thick and soft
Powerful and solid grey, hovering aloft
Where pristine snowflakes abound
All bright and shiny white
Heavy enough to ride my silver bike on
Peddle my way through today’s slippery black-ice
And wallow in the colourful heights of tomorrow
Ivor Steven (c) 2019

NEW FAVORITE!!!!!! ❤ I simply love this Ivor!
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Oh, I think you have lots of favourites, and yes I liked the happy mood of the one xx
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😉 Yes I do 🙂
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wow this is magical Ivor, love it 🙂
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This is what happens in my dreams, a fantasy world. 🤔😅
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well then best stay for a while to enjoy those 🙂
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That would be nice 🙄
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🙂
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I want to go on this adventure with you please😁
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Yes it sounds like fun. One night I’m about the suffering Children, the next night I’m flying on the clouds in a world of colour looking for tomorrow 😊🤗😀
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You have a wide repertoire of emotions Ivor. Such a blessing 😍
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I suppose it is Gina, thank you x
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Great read, thank you Ivor. Sending love and light your way. ♥.
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Hi Niki, thank you for reading, and yes I enjoy the happy mood of the poem xx
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Thank you for this fantastical and magical ride Ivor😘💕
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One of my dreamy fantasies. Funny I’ve never had a yellow and purple kite, nor a silver bike. !!
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Dreams and fantasy allows us to have everything!!!!!!!!
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I miss you dear Ivor😊lovely poem my friend💗
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Yes dear Ortensia, I’m slowly improving, sorry I’ve not been around much. Hopefully I’ll do some more blogging soon. But I’m still tired, sleeping. and resting. I hope you’re having a wonderful festive season 😊🤗
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Don’t worry about blogging just take care of yourself ,we are not going anywhere.love and hugs on your way💗
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Thank you Ortensia 🤗🙄
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Magical dream and gently uplifting music
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I’m very pleased you enjoyed this one Derrick,
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What a wonderful, magical, enchanting poem, Ivor! It is imagine-rich and sparks my imagination! 🙂 With a kite and a bike, what more does one need!? 😉 🙂 And I love that your kite is purple and yellow! Those are 2 fav colors for me! 🙂
And Mr. Waits! OHMYGOSH! Love him and his music! 🙂
HUGS!!! 🙂
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Thanks Carolyn, I was in a good mood yesterday, I’m gradually seeing myself getting betterer xx
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Good! Keep up the positivity! And remember that you continue to be prayed for and wished well!
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You are very kind to me Carolyn ❤️😉🤗
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🙂 And you are very kind to me and ’tis much appreciated! 🙂
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Lyrical and magical!
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Yes I liked this one too 🤗🤗
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You’ve used such, vivid
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Thank you
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imageries, you are, truly, an excellent crafter of words!
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Thank you for your kind very kind comments, I truly appreciate that you enjoy reading my humble writings
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I could see the clouds! I love bike riding too, I need to get back at it. It makes me feel so free. Thanks for the visual reminder!
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Bike riding is definitely good for our well being.
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Love this one! A wonderful re-read! 🙂
HUGS!!! 🙂
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Yes I’m enjoying the break of not writing. I think it’s been good for me. And I’ve been reading through some of older poems, and I’m smiling, giggling and crying at myself… I’m amazed at how much I write, and the sort of words I concoct. It’s interesting and fascinating for me to read my own older writings, as I normally don’t get a chance to read my old poems 😉📖🤔😊((hugs))
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Yes, all writers need a break once in awhile! 🙂
Good for you, for sure! and Good for you!!! 🙂
I rarely do that…read my “old” writings…but weirdly, tonight I’ve been reading through some of my oldest WP posts and poetry. It’s been fun and heart-touching.
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Yes… Heart warming and fun to look back at older writings, 😊😉🤗😄
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Oh, I do like this one Ivor! 🙂
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Lovely poem Ivor…i never had a bike too..lol…i never drove one either…i cant..lol
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Thank you Mich, the poem is a bit jumbled, a dream of youthful joy and escapism beyond the boundaries / restrictions of a recovering stroke suffer
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I can truly see this kite. Great imagery.
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Yes, a vivid dream and escapism imagery, about my struggles with strokes
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Beautiful Ivor
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Thank you Lorraine, yes, very much a dreamy piece and my escapism thoughts about recovering from my strokes
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Yes I have this kind of thought too Ivor and it is good that we are able to go back and remember these things to help us get through when bad things hit us in life. I go back to members of my childhood a lot and it helps me through my blindness and being in a wheelchair. It is wonderful that we can carry these things in our minds and use them when we need them. All the very very Best to you my friend. Xxxx
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Yes Lorraine, our minds look for a comfort zone to help us cope 😊😂🤗
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And thank God that they can find one
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It seems for me kites, bikes and my childhood fascination with clouds is where my dreams want to go when I’m under stress… xxx
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Mine go to the stars Ivor. And the skies, particularly the night sky xxx
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Yes there’s a beautiful secure feeling within the night sky….. and are you feeling well with your self this week …xxx
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I am doing ok thankyou Ivor. Xxx
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That’s good to know Lorraine
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Quite a powerful piece. Love the imagery you painted in this one. 💛
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Yes, a dream like poem, about my happy childhood, and my present escapism images away from the difficulties of my stroke.
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You’ve come a long way since that stroke. Heck, you wouldn’t have been able to travel to the states util you were well enough. You’re a very strong man!
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Your encouragement is very heart warming dear Beckie
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You’re so very welcome, dear friend!
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