Yes, I am small in this overburdened world
But I flutter freely when unfurled
I could be a family picture collage
Or a tiny squirrel amongst the foliage
On his journey, of ups and downs
Collecting and storing his acorn crowns
The trick is to enjoy the ups
While the floodgates are shut
Sometimes, I did nearly drown
Other times, I floated upside down
During the many seasonal rains
I wondered, if I’d every swim again
So then, I pretended to write a biblical book
Ignorantly thinking no-one would ever look
Afterwards, I thought I could walk on water
Then my boots became water-logged
And if you need to walk a mile in my shoes
You’ll have to learn how to swim, and sing the blues
Ivor Steven (c)Β October 2019

First Ivor, I’ll need to find my
waterproof blue suede shoes π
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They’ll be out in the shed
Covered in spider webs
Waiting for an Elvis revival
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A cheeseburger
and a hip replacement
was all that was sent π
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Love your piece AND nick cave
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Nick Cave is a fav’ of mine…. I’ve been listening to ‘Dirty Three’ today, it’s Warren Ellis’s band, the violinist out of Nick Cave’s, The Bad Seeds.. Look bythem up on YouTube, I’m out and only on my phone at the moment ππ
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Will do! Enjoy your time out π
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I’m walking in the park, and I’ve thought of good Haiku π³π³
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Aw. and Oh!
I read this amazing poem twice and I will read it again. I think it is one of your VERY best yet, Ivor. It’s so filled with life and emotions. Tears are filling my eyes, because I can relate to this poem so VERY much.
We must be willing to walk in other people’s shoes…a mile and longer. We must do so to understand and to offer genuine support.
Please keep doing whatever you have to, to keep afloat…keep enjoying the ups. We need you in this world, you with your loving heart, wise mind, gentle spirit, ETC! π
HUGS!!! π
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Oh wow Carolyn …now you have me crying with your delightful comments…. which are all basically what I was trying to express in my words…… and yes there’s a lot in this poem… but I was hoping everyone could understand my poem….. It’s a very intense piece, but with a hint of humour…. which is the way I’ve survived, always trying to smile along with life’s adversities .. xxxx
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Yes, me, too! So we keep smilin’ and thrivin’! π
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Well, at some point now, do we not all have waterlogged boots? Lovely title especially ππ
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Yes our water-logged boots, are proof that we have journeyed through all of life’s broken rivers and climbed out the other side…….
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Swimming and singing. I thought of dancing in the rain when I read this. π
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Yes lets dance… I think it was my life story in 18 lines…. xxx
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Very descriptive of daily life.
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Thank you Lucien, I think I was trying tell my life story in 18 lines. π π€
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Ya done did good!
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Oh Ivor I really felt this one!!!!
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Thank you Linda, I hope so.. It’s my life’s story in 18 lines, and I think it work ππππ€π€
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“We Walk on Memories.
Memories are written in the sand that we walk on and cemented by the love in our hearts.β
β Anthony T. Hincks
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Thank you Eugenia, I love the the Quote
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Ohhhh Ivor its such a joy to read this poem knowing how and where the emotion is coming from…π€π€
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Thank you dear Mich, I was trying to write a life’s story in 18 lines, I think it turned out OK π€π
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An excellent piece, Ivor!! Very nice! π€
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Thank you dear Beckie, ππ€
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πAlways a pleasure!
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It says all and we can each relate. π
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Thanks Sue…. I think it’s one of my good ones…..xx
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A great analogy, Ivor
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