I’m dressed in ocean blue
Delivering, my parting kiss for you
Again anxious, not to be late
Remembering, our first date
Then, life’s destiny and fate
Now, wallowing in our left-over wake
Ivor Steven (c)Β October
I’m dressed in ocean blue
Delivering, my parting kiss for you
Again anxious, not to be late
Remembering, our first date
Then, life’s destiny and fate
Now, wallowing in our left-over wake
Ivor Steven (c)Β October
Oh, Ivor, that is really lovely. π
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Oh, Sue the we
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Wrong button again, the last 2 weeks has been a good process for me, and I’m happy with the memories I’ve produced in my poems πβ€οΈππ€
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I’ve enjoyed them too Ivor. π
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Love this trio of photo, poem, and song! The photo and song certainly evoke the very feelings you’ve captured in your words! π
HUGS!!! π
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Excellent
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Thank you Derrick π€
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What a lovely memory. A synopsis, of a relationship.
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Another chapter in the book πππ€π
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And what a great book!
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Oh, Ivor… In just a few lines, you captured your the beautiful beginning and ending of your relationship. Beautifully penned. π π
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Thank you Beckie, it was just a few lines, because I remember, I was shaking like a leaf at the time πππ€
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This perfectly encapsulates all of those components of a relationship that imprint themselves on us. Really nice turns of phrase in here too. Thanks for sharing, Ivor. Tom.
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Thank you Tom, and I remember, shaking like a leaf, 4 years ago, and I think this piece was all I could write on the day….
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I’m dressed in ocean blue. That’s beautiful, Ivor.
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I actually wore a blue shirt on the day, the colour and the vastness of the ocean, I think captured the void I was feeling at the time. π€π
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That’s exactly how I saw it.
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Oh, that makes me smile ……. thanks…
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nothing more beautiful than this today. you’re so gifted, my dear Ivor. I missed your writing while I was gone for a few weeks. π
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Thank you dear Kara for your kind comments… and I’ve been a bit absent myself, xxx
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Stunning. I love the blue tone both in your imagery and woven throughout
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Broken love weaves a vivid picture Harley
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Awesome ivor! Loved it!
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