How deep is your ocean ?
Are your tears drowning in the Red Sea ?
Is that black keyboard able to swim ?
Will your wet-suit protect you from the frozen lake ?
How long before your aqueducts run dry ?
Have you someone, to repair your heart’s broken levees ?
Are you able to withstand the crushing waves ?
Will those floodwaters ever stop ?
Has the smouldering really been doused ?
Were your love ones ashes, washed away today ?
Is this the story of life, for you ?
Then, ring-out the moisture, from your leftover soul
Fill the fire buckets, with raindrops of sorrow
Let us join the human-chain, and throw water on the flames
Ivor Steven (c)Β Nov 2019
Beautiful words full of inspiration, depicts life today. Fire Bucket to put out the flames I think we need a lot more.
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I’m pleased you appreciated this piece, … No matter our circumstances, or the twisted journey of our life…. we are still a part of the “human-chain” and we are here to love and share the planet we walk on…….
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Thank you we are all responsible and must tread lightly wherever we go.
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inspirational
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Thank you Beth… I was hoping my words and messages were easy enough to interpret….
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Your words are wonderful here
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Thank you Ian,
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Incredibly powerful piece, Ivor.
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Yes Beckie, thank you so much ππ
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Ivor, youβve done it again. Simply marvelous, sir. π
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Ok Kara, you are very kind, thank you, and yes, I am very happy with this one
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If only we could distribute all the available water exactly where it is needed!
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Wow Peter, that would be a terrific treat ππ
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Rich imagery, Ivor.
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Thank you Derrick… a big picture, and a little message….
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I shall join you Ivor x
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Good girl… that’s my little message here, no matter our circumstances, we the people, are all still a part of this planet, that we all share…..and together, we are all responsible for the love she needs………….
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Lol I hope you are not calling me a LITTLE gurl! π
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Haha… all hands on deck…..xx
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Something different that I read about today! Thank you for the wonderful poetry.
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Thank you for reading ‘my something different’
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Vivid images, important message, a heart-tugger that should lead to action! Excellent, Ivor, and timely.
You know my tears flow for this tragedy and the loss of life and nature.
(((HUGS)))
PS…those flowers are my fav color!
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The flowers are called Blue Statice, from the group limonium… they are hardy and enjoy our dry conditions (hence my photo choice), and they’re in my courtyard garden…..
My poem was a bit jumbled, but I’m trying to say that no matter our circumstances, we are all still an important part of this planet, we all walk the same earth, breath the same air, therefore we are all responsible for our planet’s care…. “no excuses”….” join the human chain, and throw water on the flames”… and I’m using “the flames” in a very all round general term…. like earth, wind and fire…… and yes all of this was inspired by our heartfelt tears and conversation/chat yesterday morning, and these words are the ones that evolved from our joint compassion for our planet…….. my sore mind(my headaches have flared up again) wasn’t going to rest until I’d constructed something worth while…. wow… I hope that explains all my crazy thoughts, that go on inside my head while I’m having breakfast !!!
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Oh, I’m so glad our tears and our chat inspired this amazing and very important poem!
Yes…I so agree with, and understand, what you’ve shared!
Wish everyone on the planet agreed with us! π
I am so sorry to hear about your headaches flaring up! π¦ That makes me so sad. I’m worried about you. Know that you are in my thoughts and prayers for healing and good health. (((HUGS)))
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Good morning Carolyn, I’ve just woken up, and resting here in bed,… It’s 7.40am, and I’ve had good sleep
Through my window the sun is shining and that makes me smile
I see the “courtyard of dreams” glowing and growing outside.
Except for the headache, I’m ok, although battling with the headache is tiring, like battling and pushing into a strong wind all day.
I’ll probably rest out in my courtyard most of the day, do some writing watching my little world soothing my soul
Itβs thoroughly relaxing place for me
I’ve a lot of lvor quotes and comments, stored in my phone notebook
I’ll do a post about them, haha I won’t have to do any thinking.
Itβs hard for me to stop the wheels from turning, but I’ve got my sound system from my computer hooked up to my courtyard speakers, oh what bliss
I’ve collected a playlist of Leonard Cohen’s new songs, there’s 9 of them so far that I’ve found I’ll attach playlist here for you ((hugs)) https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL676Af4EFlsoIjpDZJHZ4BK05ezPnlL0U
I’ve never tried to send one of my playlists on the phone, please let me know if it works for you xxxxππππππ
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I’m so glad you got a good sleep!
I hope the rest of your day went well and you were able to relax and take it easy.
Thank you for the Mr. Cohen playlist! It worked! I am listening to them now! π
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I’m so pleased the Leonard Cohen link worked for you…. Here’s all the lyrics to those songs… an early early Chrissy present for you….. so play the songs and follow the words…. oh we are so privileged to have Leonard singing to us from heaven…
https://1drv.ms/b/s!Asumt4cZ9A65hLhG875ZsAS4JOdryg?e=TPzo0x
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Thank you, Ivor!
We are indeed! His music will live on for many more generations!
I hope your day is going well…and not so much pain.
(((HUGS))) π
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Hello Carolyn…. I’m up and the sun is shining and my courtyard is peaceful, …I had my brekkie out there…… but my night was no good……can not wait for Tuesday to come quick enough….
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Oh, gosh. π¦ Sorry to hear about your night.
Prayers for Tuesday to come quickly!
Maybe your head and body will let you take a nap or get some good rest today.
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Yes I think I will Carolyn…. my sore eyes are dropping out of their sockets !! xx
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Deeply emotional Ivor. (And I hope you are feeling better.)
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Oh Colleen, I wrapped myself into the poem and then wanted to save the planet as well…..
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A poem from the heart – A big heart! β€οΈ π
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