My poem ‘You Cannot Shoot or Electrocute It’ is published at “The Lockdown Journal” and thank you to the editor Mona for accepting my poem….
You Cannot Shoot Or Electrocute It
I see grey clouds drifting across the sky
And I hear the great white bear continue to lie
You cannot shoot it
Nor can you electrocute it
I cannot hear your bullets blazing
Nor can your bombs do the erasing
Your insincere words cannot stop it
Nor can your falsehoods hide it
I cannot see your pain and fears
Nor can I see your sympathetic tears
Your money keeps you safe in the ivory tower
But will your money send the people flowers
Ivor Steven (c) March 2020
Bob Dylan, wrote these profound lyrics 50 years ago…
“All Along The Watchtower”
“There’s too much confusion, I can’t get no relief
Businessmen, they drink my wine, plowmen dig my earth
None of them along the line know what any of it…
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Beautiful and raw with so much meaning. I re-read this a couple of times to really absorb it, and the meaning is powerful. A fantastic piece with stunning imagery.
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Thank you Lucy, and yes there is strong message in my little poem, in the end, the fight is up to “us”, and the work of the “helpers” and the “scientists”
Not the politicians
Not their bombs
Not their continual falsehoods
They still hide under corporate aprons… 💙🌏🤔
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Amazing, Ivor. Very powerful and true.
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Thank you Rose…Yes ” us” humans will survive… in the end, the fight is up to “us”, and the work of the “helpers” and the “scientists”
Not the politicians
Not their bombs
Not their continual falsehoods
They still hide under corporate aprons… 💙🌏🤔
not because of politicians
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Amen to that! It’s a terrifying thing to be going through this all right now. Stay safe!
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You too Rose 💙🌏
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Thank you! 💚
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Congrats Ivor😊😊😊
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Thank you Mich
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Congratulations again, I shall be after your autograph soon.
This was just lovely, Ivor. 🙂
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I’ll get myself a rubber stamp one 😀🤗
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You might need to!
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Haha….😀😄
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Congrats, Ivor!
I’m always so excited when your poems get recognition AND you do, too! AND that many more people will read them! 🙂
(((HUGS)))
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thank you Carolyn ((hugs)).. oh did you get my email I sent 2 days ago, About my purple plants…
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Yes, thank you for sending the purple plant photos. They are beautiful! I will respond to your e-mail soon. Things have just been busy for me.
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Congratulations – well deserved
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Thank you Derrick
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wowow ivor thats really good! I love it! ❤
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Thank you Carol, I wonder at the ignorance of the man 🤔🙄
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