This week’s Wednesday Challenge on the “Weekly Prompts” site is the word BOUNDARIES. Please go over and visit their fabulous site by clicking >>HERE . Below is my poem about the biggest social boundary every put in place on this planet !!
Sage Bush At Guard Tower Twelve
I’ve been on the run for weeks
Heading towards the Great Wall
From atop this steep hill
My nose tells me, I’m close
And I smell that distinctive sage aroma
Knowing, the sage bush is nearby
Below the gateway to guard tower twelve
My old bones shake and shiver
The Mongolians are closing quickly
Spears and arrows aquiver
Fear grips me, and I crawl low
Fingers grasping this granite boundary
Block after block, of the giant blockade
Frightened, I’m too scared to fall
Onto those deadly steel blades
And cold rugged rocks below
I clamber higher, step after step
Finally there above, I see my wish
The flowering sage bush
Mauve blooms bowing in the breeze
My chest sighs and heaves
I clear my lungs, and scream
Soon I’ll be free, as I see
Near the sage bush at guard tower twelve
The Emperor’s warriors, my reprieve
Saved, I fill the Royal message bag with sage leaves
Ivor Steven (c) April 2020.

A great poem Ivor! So well written! ❤ ❤
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Thank you Carol… a piece of escapism during these days of distancing…💙🌏
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WOW, what a poem–BRAVO!!
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Walking the Great Wall, was a dream come true…
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I can only imagine!
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It must have been an experience of a lifetime Ivor?
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China was a fascinating place… would have loved to have seen more…. xx
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Never been there but i want to go there
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The ancient part is up north near Beijing, but China is so vast…. You can actually see the Great Wall from the moon 😁
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Yeah i have read that part …i hope one day i’ll get there
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Now that was exciting!
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Oh Rose thank you, walking the Great Wall was so exciting for me……
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That poem had my heart pumping! It was great! I’m glad you had an exciting time, too! 😊
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Yeah… it’s a revised version, and I think it worked Ok…
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Definitely!
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You strayed from your usual path and it worked so well. 🙂
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Thank you Sue, yes the new version has a 2 extra lines and a number of word changes, and the poem fitted in ok with the prompt.. xxx
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You took us right there – and an apt metaphor, too.
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Thank you Derrick, and metaphorically speaking, the wall was set up to keep undesirable people at a comfortable distance away !!
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This is so very well evoked! Bravo!
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Thank you for reading and your lovely feedback 😊💙🌏
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You are very welcome indeed. I look forward to seeing your work. 🙂🌺
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My, I’m at the edge of my seat! Epic poem. Beautifully crafted, Ivor. xo
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I feel like we are right there with you! Great word-pics and you got our senses and emotions involved, Ivor!
I know this is a memory you will keep for life!
(((HUGS))) ❤ 🙂
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Yes Carolyn it’s a lovely memory, although a bit sad at the moment, my friend who I went with to China, has got cancer back again, and she has to have an operation soon…. 🤔🤨
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OH, NO! 😦 I am so very sorry to hear this! 😦
I will keep her in my thoughts and prayers. Tell her I care.
(((HUGS))) for her, too.
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I not allowed to go and see her,,, it’s a bit tough for under present circumstances….. xx
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Yes, so sad. Many are facing their on-going health issues alone.
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