G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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As you are not surprised, Ivor, this poem has me crying. You’ve captured how I feel…how so many people feel.
I wish for everyone to take their feelings…sadness, anger, pain, confusion, fear (etc) and turn them into positive actions where we reach out and help others in kind and loving ways.
(((HUGS)))
PS…The song you chose has always been heart-touching to me.
This did indeed come across very effectively. It is a worthy achievement, to be able to communicate the depth of emotion of the poet through this medium. Well done. π
I feel the heartache right now.
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Yes Elizabeth, our feelings about the situation are unavoidable
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It is so heavy at times
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Yes Beth…. I feel the weight from way over here in Geelong…
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I can do relate. Well done Ivor
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Thank you Harley….
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I feel this so deeply, Ivor.
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As the poem suggests…. I was crying when I wrote this piece…. It’s full of my heartfelt emotions…..xx
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Hugs, Ivor. These are very trying times. I hope we emerge as better human beings.
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We shall certainly hope so xx
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As you are not surprised, Ivor, this poem has me crying. You’ve captured how I feel…how so many people feel.
I wish for everyone to take their feelings…sadness, anger, pain, confusion, fear (etc) and turn them into positive actions where we reach out and help others in kind and loving ways.
(((HUGS)))
PS…The song you chose has always been heart-touching to me.
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Quietly seething
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Thank you Derrick… I let my emotions flow into this one……
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Unavoidable tears.
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Sorry… I was very emotional while writing this one……
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No need for apologies. At all !
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I feel you Ivor…and i hope this ends soon..π€
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There is hope… ..but in the meantime….. I’m so sad………..
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π€π€π€ahhh i feel you..
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Heavy emotions! I can relate. π
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Yes Eugenia, and I was very emotional while I write this poem..
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Ohh this is so painfully good! The plea, the pain so well reflected. βWhereβs forgiveness? Whoβs saddest?β
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Thank you Pallavi, my teary emotions are full of sadness
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Very well done indeed…”killing a black rose on the ground” then “deep down we all feel hollow” and “peace smoke halo” . Marvellous. Bravo.
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This was a teary emotional poem from my grey pastel pencil
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This did indeed come across very effectively. It is a worthy achievement, to be able to communicate the depth of emotion of the poet through this medium. Well done. π
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