Who’s The Saddest

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My smokey eyes have been faltering

Sad necessary tears have me wavering

Looking down the knife-edges

Balancing on red cliff-edges

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How will the fog of darkness be lifted?

From angry souls that have drifted

Mirror, mirror, who’s the saddest

Mirror, mirror, where is forgiveness

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The heart-breakers came around

Killing a black-rose on the ground

Deep down we all feel hollow

And none can see the peace-smoke halo

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Ivor Steven (c) June 2020

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

26 thoughts on “Who’s The Saddest”

  1. As you are not surprised, Ivor, this poem has me crying. You’ve captured how I feel…how so many people feel.

    I wish for everyone to take their feelings…sadness, anger, pain, confusion, fear (etc) and turn them into positive actions where we reach out and help others in kind and loving ways.
    (((HUGS)))
    PS…The song you chose has always been heart-touching to me.

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