My crying eyes are smoke filled rivers
And I’ve a blackened heart that’s bruised
From pushing the dark sky away
My knees are aching cushions full of burnt splinters
And I’ve blackened hands that are trembling
From holding the dark sky at bay
My feet are crumbling foundations in an ashen world
And I’ve a blackened soul that’s injured
From embracing the dark sky everyday
Ivor Steven (c) June 2020.
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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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Such anguish
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Overwhelming pain
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There’s no gain, without pain…..
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Such a moving poem Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje, ☺🤗
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You’re welcome 😉
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Powerful imagery. Love how you made it so physical.
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Thank you V.J 🤗💙🌏
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Welcome.
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Such sorrow, hopefully sharing it helps lighten it Ivor.
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Very movingly evoked
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Thank you, I am moved by your appreciation of my writings. 😊🤗
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Oh it’s my absolute pleasure! Thank YOU for your gift to us of your poetry.
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Beautifully penned Ivor.🌸
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Thank you Laleh, I warmly appreciate your comment…💙🌏
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My pleasure.🌺
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So moving, Ivor 🙂
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Thank you Sue…. a mixture of my olden struggles, intertwined with our present day situations/events….😀
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Fabulous penned
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Thank you Rajani
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Thank you sir
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Please read my post
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A powerful and moving piece! Wow!
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Thank you Eugenia, ♥🌏
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You’re welcome, Ivor! 😉
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It sounds like you’ve been too close to the fire. Pain, horror, sadness. Mona
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Not so much pain, more of life choice of difficult circumstances that I had to endure… 😂🤔♥🌏
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Through your words I feel, and share, your emotions. I’ve got the tears flowing.
May we keep pushing in positive ways. May our tears water the earth and bring an end to some of the suffering.
(((HUGS)))
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Oh not sure Carolyn… I feel torn…. Hopefully my tears are nurturing some good somewhere…. xx
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I prefer soft hearts, like yours. 🙂
There are too many people out there these days…selfish, with cold hard hearts. 😦
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I’ve yet to see a tear on the cheeks of the great white leader…..despite the multitudes suffering. ..xx
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