In these times of oppressing days
Pressing engagements are on delay
Souls are in need of a valiant Knight
To pull us from this pool of fading light
A quicksand of swallowing gloom
Rules and restrictions clinging to every room
Oh. Brave Knight save us from doom
Roll away the dark stone covering our tomb
Bring us your enlightening thunderbolt
A silver torch of liberty to our vaults
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Ivor Steven (c) July 2020
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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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We do need an enlightening thunderbolt.
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This is a very dark post! I think we all feel like this way sometimes during this time of pandemic…I know I do! The soulful music goes very well with the poem.
Dwight, thank you for expressing the feelings that we all are experiencing from time to time. Denial does not help. Better days to come!
Cheryl
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Thank you Cheryl… Ivor.
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Yes… we need a jolt…xx
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A valiant brave knight…yes, indeed!
What a powerful, encouraging poem, Ivor! The images and emotions are vivid!
Hey, I just thought of something…we can be the knight’s assistants when we help someone who needs help. π
(((HUGS))) π
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That’s a great Idea Carolyn…. Our brave Knight will need many assistants…. .and we all need to assist and help each other…..
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Superb imagery
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Thank you Derrick….
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“enlightening thunderbolt”…yes!! We all can be the brave knights helping each other. π
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Yes…. that’s what I’m trying say …we all need to be a brave Knight… ππ
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Awwww i love this Ivor. “To pull us from this pool of fading light”…we need this…
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My magical imagination seeking respite and relief….πππ
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We need this, Ivor! Beautiful imagery and a magical piece. π β¨
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Thank you Eugenia, and we all need to be brave Knights. ππ
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You’re welcome, Ivor.
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I have been feeling like this for a very long time along with many others. It is time for many on high to come and blast the Earth and clear the decks once and for all.
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Yes.. this atmosphere of oppression is tough on our well being. ππ
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Fabulously evoked.
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I love the idea of a brave knight, definitely not the dark one. π
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yes Sue…..and we all need to be a brave knight..xx
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Love this poem and the accompaniment
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I’ve been listening Hans Zimmer lately, …soothing music in these isolation times..
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Yes and we lost Ennio Morricone R.I.P
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Oh …
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