Dawn sunshine awakens my weary bones
And I hear the early birds are singing
About my day’s visions of flying towards home
Then I remember the tune and start humming
As the windless sky beckons my ocean spirit
It’s time to travel beyond these noisy urban alarms
Sit upon cool sand, and listen to the waves lyrics
Rhythmically roll into my waiting arms
Ivor Steven (c)Β July 2020
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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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Ah, the lullaby of the water –
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Lockdown days are not good for my ocean spirit…
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it’s hard. I walk to the river most every day, the water is so calming
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Beautiful Ivor.
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Thank you Gabriela
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My pleasure πΈ
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I think I was a sailor in another life.
I enjoyed reading this, Ivor. The descriptions are spot on.
Great music too.
Isadora π
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Thank you Isadora… I happened to be in right spot at the right time….π
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Travel far in your imagination.
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Our only way to travel …at the moment…
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Yup!
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hypnotically rhythmic just like those waves … good one Ivor!
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Thank you Kate…. one of wishful dreamy ones…xx
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you excel at those and sad loving tributes Ivor, they are your trademark!
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Thank you Kate….
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Gorgeous photo, Ivor! And the lyrics are even more beautiful. I especially like the last two lines about waves’ lyrics rhythmically rolling into your waiting arms. Magical!
Take care. Cheryl
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Thank you Cheryl… I’m on a roll of happy poems, photos and music…..
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AW! A perfect trio of photo, poem, and song, Ivor! So beautiful, so calming!
The ocean…a great place to escape life’s burdens…fun to go to the ocean, but, also, nice to escape there in our minds. π
HUGS!!! π
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Yes Carolyn… dreamy escapism… xx
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I remembered the story of Gina when she went to visit you …i am reminded of her joyful account of the ocean..
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Beautiful post
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Dawn sunshine awakens my weary bones! Oh, I can relate to that one, though just lately it’s been more rain on the window than sunshine! π
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Down here, it’s frosty mornings… !!
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Wow. Would love to spend early morning time on the cool sand. This is so beautiful.
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Thank you Kritika…. yes ..looking for a piece of escapism
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My pleasure π. Best place to refresh the soul. ππΈ
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Beautifully evocative
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thank you Derrick
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Splendid writing. The imagery is on point, from the very first line, ‘Dawn sunshine awakens my weary bones’ to the last. And the rhythm accentuates the theme of the poem. I love it, it was a really fun read.
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Anyways, it’s writing like this made me nominate you for the Ideal Inspiration Blogger Award. I hope you don’t mind. Visit https://thepoetspeace.wordpress.com/2020/07/13/ideal-inspiration-blogger-award/ to check it out
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Thank you Lazarus for your kindness, but these days, I don’t like doing awards…. π
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You’re Welcome, Ivor. I totally understand
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Thank you for understanding.
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Thank you Lazarus….. when I need some respite, a sandy beach and the ocean is where you’ll find me..,
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Welcome, I wish I was blessed with a geographical location such as yours so my stresses could be washed away by the ocean’s waves
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Yes, I’m very fortunate..
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This brings back memories when I used to live by the ocean. I loved to hear the sound of the waves coming to ashore.
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Yeah… another ocean spirit
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You brought me the ocean Ivor, thank you. I so miss the waves here inland.
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My is a vision at the moment, because of lockdown, I’m missing the beach too. πππ
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How beautiful! Thank you for sharing this one. β€π
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The ocean is where my dreams drift to… xx
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Me too…We live here on the Jurassic Coast, termed “an area of outstanding nature beauty”!
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I spent most of my youth at the Ocean Grove surf beach, a part of our regions surf coast….
Images of surf coast Victoria, Ocean Grove
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Absolutely wonderful! β€πβ€πβ€π
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Yeah, the link opened ok πππ
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Hi Ivor, you might like to check out the music of Pierce Turner he’s local to me but based in the States comes home on occasion to perform
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Thanks Chris, I definitely will do…
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I hope you get to your ocean soon Ivor….but your words in the meantime are lovely and very sea worthy.
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Thank you Colleen. πππ
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You’re welcome Ivor π
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Your poems are beautifully natural, Ivor.
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Thank you Kim, I basically spent most of my youth at the beach, so be emotional about the ocean is spiritually easy for me to write about.. ππ
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