Once I was a little fella, bursting at the seams
Who loved moonbeams and had big dreams
Years have gone by, now I watch and I listen
And sadly I feel our world’s listing
I’m an emotional old guy
And one day, I’m gonna die
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Life has taught me to be patient
My story unfolds in poetic testaments
Words written, some happy, others blatant
Little things that grow by accident
Little rhymes, not asking for judgement
My little rhythmical notes, my instruments
Ivor Steven (c) July 2020.
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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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Ivor, I like this poem very much! It describes a person I am sure I would like to know. I enjoyed the self-deprecating humor and openness. You are a wonderful poet, and, I suspect, a great human being! Take care of yourself. Cheryl
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Thank you Cheryl, I truly appreciate your kind words and thoughts,.. I write words that I feel, they are from my heart and they are real. ππππΆ
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Ivor, I can tell that what you write I heartfelt. I guess that’s why I like it so much! I don’t have much tolerance for superficiality or pretense.
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Thank you Cheryl.. It’s a matter of being honest with myself… ππ
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wonderful, wonderful
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Thank you Beth.. ππβΊ
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Your poems have a lot of logic and convey hart hitting message
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Thank you Sadje.. I write down what I’m thinking, and they accidentally come out ok. πππ
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That is a talent
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Wonderful Ivor, loving the first line π
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Thank you Sue, I think I’m still bursting at the seams,.. ππ
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straight from your heart and it sums you up perfectly … Paul wrote this song for our first nation people, and they sing it often π
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Yes… I chose the song because it’s story of a dream that came true…..xx
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I pray it does for both you and them!
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Love this! π
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Thank you Mel.. ππππΆ
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“Iβm an emotional old guy
And one day, Iβm gonna die”….ahhhh… sigh… this makes me very emotiona….sad….and more…sad.πππ
Oh, dear Ivor your poem has made its way straight through my heart .
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It’s been a nostalgic and emotional week for me Mich…. I think catching up with family and friends after the lengthy isolation time, has been overwhelming on my psyche….. ππππ
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Beautiful post
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Thank you Rajani ππππ
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A good poem to match another rousing performance, Ivor. Although this one lacked most of the old film footage the way the performing group grew as the song developed was truly symbolic.
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Yes Derrick, and do prefer this version.. Missy Higgins, sung her piece with great passion, she’s the one with the short dark hair..
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I guessed correctly then
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Yeah…
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Aw. Well, we hope you are around for many many many many many more years, SweetIvor! Another beautiful, honest, heart-felt poem that brought tears to my eyes.
Too many people overlook the things they THINK are little and they are missing out on so much joy!
Amazing song to duet with your amazing poem!
I know you will keep on writing!
(((HUGS))) π
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The song is a very special Australian song… and I didn’t have a title to the poem… and I noticed I’d used “little” a few times, and then I remember this iconic song, so I used for my Title, and it’s a great story, which seemed to suit my little story… ((Hugs))
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Happy day, Ivor! I hope your day is going well!
(((HUGS))), no bugs! π π π
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It’s Saturday morn, a chilly start.. Zero !! .. but the winter sun will shine later… (13’C )… I’ve a poem brewing, prompted by another of Derricks gorgeous photos from yesterday, the tree carving of an owl… truly fascinating….((Hugs))
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How beautiful, amazing poem.
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Thank you Tanya, I’m pleased you appreciated my little story…ππ
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Pleasure is all mine Misterπ
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I’ve just been over to your site to do a re-follow.. seems like WP dropped you out of my reader !!… It’s one of those annoying things about WP….xx
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Thanks for following me again, strange that WP will do such a thing, really annoying.
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Soo nice β£οΈβ£οΈ
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Thank you for reading my “little” poem… ππ
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You certainly grew up to a beautiful soul. It is good that after such a long time the Aboriginal peoples are starting to get recognition for their lands and skills.
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Yes Nanette, but it’s taken a long time…. …
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It takes a life time
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Yes, that’s true, a wait they did, knowing that ‘time’ would return their land. ππ€
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They are the rightful caretakers.
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Yes, and definitely better caretakers.. ππ
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so much emotion pouring out
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I suppose it’s been an emotional week for me, catching up with family and friends after 4 months of restrictions, was quite overwhelming for me.. πβΊπ’
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You are STILL that little guy bursting at the seems with dreams. β€
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This is a beautiful and enchanting autobiographical poem. Lovely
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Thank you, yes it’s my “little” story.. ππππ
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You’re very welcome.
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Aww, such a heartfelt and delightful poem, Ivor! It’s you and a part of your bio! π π
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Thank you Eugenia, I’m thrilled you enjoyed my “little” story ππ
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Little thing that grow by accident. I really liked that.
Don’t these poems and ideas grow inside of us.
Well done my friend.
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Maybe fertiliser is a natural one.. π€π
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LOL
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You song of words is like no one elseβs. Keep shining your light.
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Thank you Ali π
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