G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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74 thoughts on “Time on the Moon With a Tea and Lime”
Our cabin and the enclave that it is in was somehow saved. The fire is still going but in backcountry. Recent high winds are scaring the hell out of everyone. But no new fires today. Cross your fingers.
Maybe it’s something to do with the additives in my cuppa…. although the dark side of the moon, is probably a nicer place than the white-house..ππ
Our lockdown restrictions are starting are starting to ease off, maybe my poetry and writers groups may start up again soon, but probably after Christmas..
Oh Dwight, I shall have to educate you about the Kinks, and one of the greatest songwriters of all time in Ray Davies… And in the poem, I was trying write one for the theme of ‘Time’, which is the topic Vita Brevis upcoming Anthology, and I’m happy with this one, I might submit this poem, we are allowed to submit pieces.. ππ
Thank you for your Kind comments, and I’m so pleased my poem is receiving good reviews, as It’s one of my poems I’m submitting to Vita Brevis Magazine for their annual Anthology, and theme is ‘Time’….
Superb, Ivor! π Such vivid word-pics are now dancing in my mind! π
Oh, it’s always wonderful to go spend time with the moon! π
HUGS!!!
PS…great song! π
Magical mystery tour
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Yep to the moon and back..
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Beautiful
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Thank you Sadje…π
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Youβre welcome π
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I love the serendipitous verses…sunrise, tea, lime, hourglass, moon…some of my favorite elements! A fun poem, Ivor! β€ Cheers!
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Thank you Cheryl
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Whoops I going to say, I’m only on my phone, and I’m too clumsy for it.. Yes, it fun piece, of rhythm and rhyme, and love and time βππ
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The mysterious moon, I loved your visit and your journey there and back.π
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Thank You Sue, a good place for a cuppa tea with lime… ππ
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Beautiful π
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Thank you Ingrid, ππ
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A lovely trip – and The Kinks – that will all do nicely
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If I’m going to have cuppa on the moon, I might as well have the Kinks there too
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Quite so
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Wonderful poem ππ
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Thank you for your kind words…π
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π€π
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That sipping on tea and dream for a time resonates with me.
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Yes, I know πππ
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Mind blowing
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Thank you Rajanj. βΊππ
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oh wow…. just wow Ivor
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Thank you Mich, wow.. Ivor having some moon fun.. πππ
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ππππenjoy Ivor..
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Very very beautiful indeed πππ
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Thank you for your kind wordsπβ₯π
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It’s a pleasure always
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I just read this and it hit home. I hope you are well and safe.
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Thank you Gael, I’m going ok, except I’ve in little Tick-tock problem…. and how are you, has the fire situation settled down… πππ
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Our cabin and the enclave that it is in was somehow saved. The fire is still going but in backcountry. Recent high winds are scaring the hell out of everyone. But no new fires today. Cross your fingers.
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I didn’t realise the fires were still burning, wow. Keep safe my friend..
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Beautifully written β€β€
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Thank you reading and your kind comment.
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Thank you for writing this beautiful piece. β€
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a bit kinky! Sounds like you had a disturbed night Ivor … how are you?
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Maybe it’s something to do with the additives in my cuppa…. although the dark side of the moon, is probably a nicer place than the white-house..ππ
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it would have to be, anything would have to be …
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I enjoyed this, Ivor.
I especially liked,
“my words fall one by one
inking blues, line after line
and I care not the time”
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Thank you Ali, I was trying for rhythm and rhyme poem, and it rolled along ok..
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You did well my friend. How’s it going in your part of the world? Here, we are just all about the upcoming election.
Hope you are well.
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Our lockdown restrictions are starting are starting to ease off, maybe my poetry and writers groups may start up again soon, but probably after Christmas..
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That would be wonderful. I think we are far from things changing here in the U.S.
Take care.
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inking blues, line after line
and I care not the time
and sand flows drop by drop
from the timeless clock
Great poem Ivor. You are right when writing time becomes secondary!
I enjoyed the Kinks… first time I ever heard them!! LOL
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Oh Dwight, I shall have to educate you about the Kinks, and one of the greatest songwriters of all time in Ray Davies… And in the poem, I was trying write one for the theme of ‘Time’, which is the topic Vita Brevis upcoming Anthology, and I’m happy with this one, I might submit this poem, we are allowed to submit pieces.. ππ
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I came up on Classic Country, Folk Music of the 60s and 60s Rock and Roll. LOL Send it in… you got nothing to lose!
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Here’s a wonderful tune from the Kinks, Celluloid Heroes
https://youtu.be/yp_QkUVZGPc
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Great toons Ivor!
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Ray Davies is still playing, he’s 76..π.. The Kinks did an incredible 32 studio albums
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Wow! that is a lot of music! I guess I missed out!!
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Here’s one my fav’s from the Kinks
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Very nice! I like their mellow sounds. Interestingly, we call our little spot with the chairs by the woods Shangri-la!! Thanks Ivor.
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The name of my little abode is Shangri La ππ
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Great minds …!! :>) How nice!
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Yeah, πππ€
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You never cease to amaze me dear friend! π
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Thank you Walt, yes the words are falling one by one. I hope you are keeping well my friend.
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You’re welcome Ivor. I’m doing as ok as old age will allow.
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I missed your words dear Ivorπ
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Hi Ortensia, I hope you and the family have coped and survived all the covid situation ok
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We are all fine,just fed upπ€·π»ββοΈ
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Yes, I know the feeling. ππ
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Reblogged this on About the Jez of It and commented:
Awesome stuff from Ivor
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Oh Jez, that’s so very generous and kind of you… and I’m smiling broadly in grateful appreciation.. π
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An absolute pleasure, mate
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Fantastic, I came ,here by courtesy of Raven. The poem is brilliant, especially the last stanza. Live the Kinks, great group π
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Thank you for your Kind comments, and I’m so pleased my poem is receiving good reviews, as It’s one of my poems I’m submitting to Vita Brevis Magazine for their annual Anthology, and theme is ‘Time’….
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Good luck with that π
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I find doing submissions are quite a difficult challenge for me, with varying success rates.. Thank you for your encouragement.. π
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Just keep at it is my advice π
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Superb, Ivor! π Such vivid word-pics are now dancing in my mind! π
Oh, it’s always wonderful to go spend time with the moon! π
HUGS!!!
PS…great song! π
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Yes the moon seems to be a good spot for a relaxing cuppa !!… ππππ
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Beautiful Ivor! Such a poignant poem!
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We all need our bit of escapism Carol… π
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