I was catching a bus home this afternoon, as per normal, after my walk down Pakington St. However, mistakenly I caught the wrong bus !! I looked up, and I did not see the sign. In the long process of hopping on a couple of different buses, I eventually found my way home. During my time of the extra bus trips, I came up with the words of this poem.
Sorry! We Caught The Wrong Bus
Is this the air I breathe?
A misty haze out in front of me
Is this the sky I see?
A big smoggy Vee
High in the mountain plains, flowerless, without bees
Miles of burnt-out wasteland and no trees
Beyond the eroded soils, thereβs the earthβs oceans
Mercury settled deep, with a topping of dead fish by the millions
Is this black bitumen I walk on?
Long oily tar rolled out by the ton
Is this real water I drink?
Manufactured I sip. On my knees I do sink!
Mother nature. “Please forgive us!”
We did not know. “Sorry! We caught the wrong bus.”
Today’s poem is in response to Weekly Prompts, and their Wednesday Challenge, which is: Bus Riding! Please go over and visit their fabulous site by clicking > Here.
Ivor Steven (c) December 2020

Very currently pertinent
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Thank you Derrick, yes we still seem to be on the wrong bus
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Ivor, I remember seeing some places like this on my travels. Old abandoned mines, mountains of smelly landfill, tops of mountains chopped off, foul-smelling smokestacks spewing pollution, red tides covering the beach in dead fish. I found it so disturbing. Yes, we definitely caught the wrong bus! Take care, Ivor. Keep on calling them like you see them! β€
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Thank you Cheryl, and hopefully we can change our ways and get back on the right bus ππππ
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Love the poem, I think i remember the wrong bus episode. Was it last year when you were recovering from your stroke?
Always loved this song too., and the bus pictures are just great π thank you for doing our challenge again, always appreciated. π π°π§
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Yeah, the poem was from February last year, not long after being home from Hospital. I didn’t alter it, and just added your link ππ
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Sometimes it does seem this way! With the population exploding it does not look like a very bright future. Maybe nature will step in and rectify it for us. Glad you made it home safely!! :>)
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Hopefully we will all eventually make it home safely..
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yes, for sure! one way or the other!!
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Love the Hollies song!
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It’s a great old classic Dwight
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yes, I remember it well!
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Seems like an adventure!
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Yes Sadje, an accidental adventure ππ
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Ivor, it seems you wrote the first couple of lines for me!
Spot on about us being on the wrong bus.
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Iβm trying to get off !)
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Rinv the Belππ€l
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Ding ding π
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Beautiful artwork!
Such an important relatable poem! We’ve all had this experience physically (wrong bus, wrong direction, wrong way, etc. ), emotionally, with what is going on in the world, etc.
A fav song!
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(((HUGS))) π
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Thank you Carolyn, hopefully we can get back on the right bus, before we drive into dead end πππ
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I’m looking forward to making some adjustments and using the ‘bus’ less.
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Just ring the bell when you want to get off. ππππ
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To our knees for Mother Nature sounds a perfect gesture to me – perfect poem while on the wrong bus!
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Hopefully we’ll see the error of ways, get off our knees, and get back onboard the right bus…
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Love this metaohor Ivor.. i think we are still on the wrong bus too..and its sad…
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Yes Mich… Hopefully weβll see the error of our ways, get off our knees, and get back onboard the right busβ¦ππ
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Great song π
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Yep a classic
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Wow! The perfect song for your poem, Ivor! I think we’ve been on the wrong bus for a long time and not aware of the repercussions. π π
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Thank you Eugenia, and yes you are right, we’ve been on the wrong bus for too long πππ
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Most welcome, Ivor! π π π
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Love this poem, it resonates with times I have been somewhere unfamiliar, but also a sense of my part in ecology, you give a sense of the vastness of nature and our need to see beyond just our little bit. And bonus, the Hollies.
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Thank you Paul, an older poem of mine, but I am afraid it is still very relevant and nothing seems to be changing. The allowing of the Indian coal mining in Queensland is an environmental disaster
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Yes, a major blunder in policy.
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wow! A great poem Ivor! A poignant reminder to us all!
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Thank you Carol.. ππ€
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Great poem! Totally relatable…
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Thank you for reading..
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