I’m walking on air
My old heads in the clouds
Will my kite fly too
Ivor Steven (c) March 2021
I’m walking on air
My old heads in the clouds
Will my kite fly too
Ivor Steven (c) March 2021
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20
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Beautiful ❤
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Thank you d.a. 😊💛
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It’s a pleasure
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I’m sure that it will
It’s already touched my heart
soon many will read 😊
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Thank you for your kind words Ingrid.. I suppose I’m suffering from “Authoritis” 😅😏
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It could be verse! (As my Grandma used to say 🤣)
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❤️
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Your “kite” is gonna’ soar…all around the world…many adventures…many readers…many hearts touched by your poems! 🙂 Enjoy…revel even 🥳 …in your walking-on-air-head-in-the-clouds-kite-flyin’ days! You deserve THE best, Ivor! 🙂
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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😀😊 I hope I don’t go too high !! … so my feet cannot touch the ground .. this old poet/plumber is scared of heights !! .. I’ll need a safety net for the flight back down… 😍😎
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a book launching kite, love it! and Pink Floyd brings back so many memories 🙂
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I’ve always loved this Pink Floyd song, and my little Haiku seem a perfect opportunity to use it for the first time on my site… 😀😍😎
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I used to watch surfing clips to PF 🙂
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Lovely haiku, Ivor. ❤ Happy for you! All the best!
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Thank you Cheryl.. 😊💛
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So lovely, how you conveyed this 🙂 It will fly!
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Thanks for your thoughtful words Pragalbha…😀
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You are very welcome 🙂
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Wonderful ❤️
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Enjoy flying high 🙂
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It’ll be fun Sue..
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It does, Ivor
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I love your little poem and Pink Floyd is in my blog today, too –
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Yep.. I’m on a high..
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You and your kite both will fly high!
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Thank you Soiba… Not too high… I’m scared of heights 😊
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Me too but when you reach there, you take it over 🙂
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Ok.. 😊🤗🌏
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Fly, Ivor, fly! 🎈🪁
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Haha .. not too high…. i’m scared of heights… 😀
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The end is realistically involving and moving, Ivor
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Thank you Henry, and yes although things are surreal for me at the moment,, but somehow it’s real… 😊
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I can feel it. I always wish you the best of luck in your poetic journey and your life endeavors, Ivor
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Thank you Henry, a bit of good luck is always necessary.. 😊
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A great Haiku, Ivor.
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Yes, I am at a high point in my poetry career. 😊🌏
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yes, you are… and it is wonderful! I think of you as I wrote my poem for today!
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I shall have a look Dwight.. I’m just out of bed (7.30am) and at my computer now
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Hope you have a wonderful day!
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wonderful haiku! ❤
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Flying high 🌏😊
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