At the morn I peep
Eyes open wide to the light
Seeing future moons
Ivor Steven (c) April 2021
At the morn I peep
Eyes open wide to the light
Seeing future moons
Ivor Steven (c) April 2021
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20
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Beautiful!
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Thanks… I enjoy writing Haiku Pragalbha
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eyes wide open to the light – perfect
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Thanks Beth .. another piece for Easter..
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Lovely poem.
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Thank you 😀🌏
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Wonderful. I can almost hear you reading it out loud.
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Thanks Ali… yes I formed the haiku quickly, as if the words were already on my mind… 😀
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Always lovely to see the moon in daytime! My kids normally point it out to me 🌝
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Yes ..it’s a fascinating sight.. 😀
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Beautiful image filled haiku and photo pairing!
You are the King of Haiku! 🙂
(((HUGS))) 🙂
PS…Erika’s voice and the words to that song always touch my heart and soul!
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Haha .. the King of Haiku… no, no… I’m watching the ‘Game of Thrones’ series at the moment, all the Kings are dropping likes flies… maybe just a Knight would be fine … Sir Ivor of Haiku, sounds grand… 😀😎😀
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Ha!!! 😀
We are watching The Musketeers drama series from the BBC…and, yes, the Cardinals and the Kings don’t always fare so well. 😮
Sir Ivor of Haiku is perfect!!! 🙂
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I’ll wear my new armour tomorrow at the ‘pub’ 😄😎
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Excellent
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Thank you Derrick..
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Beautifully penned, Ivor!
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Thanks Eugenia . and yes this one worked ok 😄🌏
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My pleasure, Ivor! 😊
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Beautifully evoked musings ❤🌹
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Thank you 😄🌏
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You’re very welcome indeed
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A wonderful homage to the daytime moon, one of my favorite sights! A lovely photo paired with the perfect haiku. ❤ Take care, Ivor.
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Thanks for your gorgeous comments Cheryl 😄😊🌏
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At the morn I peep
Eyes open wide to the light
Seeing future moons
Clouds would conceal tomorrows
Truth defies them from above
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I like your additional lines 😄
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