Here is another poem that I recently submitted, but failed at the selection table, but again, I am now allowed to publish this piece here on my Website… Enjoy !!
My Faerie Godmother, Joanna
The midnight hour is here, and I am ready to hit the moonlit track
Beyond the starry silence, I hear the mystical forest calling me back
My bones are trembling with nervous anticipation
As I sense faerie dust drifting over the blue-gum plantation
Urging me to visit my faerie godmother, Joanna
My days with her are always fun, especially playing with her pet goanna
Her tiny cottage is near the coastal village of Ulladulla
On the banks of the mysteriously green lake Coonawarra
Where auntie Joanna flits about in the purple shadows of her Jacaranda trees
While teasing and dancing in between her pet goanna’s crooked knees
I have been hiking for hours and dawn is breaking
And I pause to bask in the morning’s magical awakening
However, the air is far too still, and I feel something is amiss
Usually, my auntie would be flitting about to playfully blow me a kiss
Then the local mayor comes forward with the sad news about Joanna
My faerie godmother has been eaten by her pet goanna
Ivor Steven (c) June 2021

A delightful poem, Ivor! ❤ But how evil of you to kill off the heroine in the final lines! I had to look up "goanna," although I was familiar with monitor lizards and komodo dragons. This poem is devilishly good fun! Someone has no sense of humor not to snap it up! 🙂 Take care!
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Thank you Cheryl .. and I fun writing this one .. oh .. and the reference to Joanna, .. my Carole’s second name is Joan, 😊😌
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I agree with Cheryl, this is delightful! I do feel sorry for Joanna at the end though 😳
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Thank you Ingrid .. yes that’s the idea, to feel sorry for Joanna .. The only “name”mentioned in my faerie poem .. 😌😄🌏
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This one reminds me of the story Illywhacker. I think maybe we talked about it before. There were lots of Goanas in it!
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Apparently my poem was too much about the characters and didn’t include enough of were faeries live… maybe they didn’t read it properly .. !!
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Sounds like it! 🤓
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I needed you to a judge Ingrid … 😂
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Any time 🤩
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Oops, a tragic ending to your fairytale.
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Not all fairytales have happy endings 😊🌏📖
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That’s true 👍
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Delightful read, Ivor but it’s sad that it ended so terribly for her!
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Thank you Shweta .. Joanna is the only “name” mentioned in my poem .. there’s my hidden significance for that ?? 😄🌏😎
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Yes. I had noticed that 🙂
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I love your humor Ivor! Eaten indeed! Don’t know what will be come of you as a result!!
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The twisted humourous poet has his own little hidden significance behind the “name” Joanna .. 😊🌏📖
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I saw that! Very nice!
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Funny with a sad ending
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Thanks Beth .. not all fairytales have a happy ending 📖😊🌏
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I admire how you generate poetry of so many different kind and feeling 🙂
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Thank you Cassa, I like to vary my writings, and expand on where my imagination may take me … a mixture of dreams, fantasy, imagination, and the ridiculous 😎😄🌏
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You are very welcome 🙂 It is amazing!
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I remember this one! It makes me laugh! 😀
Sorry about Joanna’s demise…but at least she had faerie fun beforehand. And what an unusual way to go! 😮 🦎 AND her name rhymes with her pet! 🦎
No good female names rhyme with lizard! HA! 😛
Wonderful poem, Ivor! And perfect photo and song/vid to accompany it! 🙂
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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The whole secret behind the poem is that Joanna is the only “name” mentioned in the poem .. Carole’s second name was ‘Joan’ 😊😄🌏📖
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Aw, that’s sweet! Pretty name! 🙂
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Oh dear
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I knew that when I read ‘amiss’ it was not going to end well! 😉
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Wowww!! Such a amazing poem.. very beautiful penned..!
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Thank you for your fabulous comments 😊🌏
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Absolutely my pleasure..!
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Delightful poem, Ivor! Your imagination shines!
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Thank you Eugenia.. I enjoy being with my faerie friends 😄🌏
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🎇 🎆
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I love this! I love the ending 🙂
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Thank You Reeny. I do enjoy writing my faerie stories 😄🌏
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Brilliant but what an ending! 😀
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Thank you Sue, yeah a bit of sad twist .. 😊🌏
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This made me chuckle. I did wonder about the wisdom of keeping a goanna as a pet while i was reading the poem. 😀
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Yes 😊 a large pet for a little faerie 😄 … one of pieces of escapism Suzanne 🌏🤔
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