An Old Plumber, An Ex-Carer, An Amateur Poet, Words From The Heart
Church Mouse (a Haiku)
Hello dear readers and followers, today I am presenting another Haiku … I seem to be on a roll for writing Haiku lately … and I have no rhyme or reason as to why this is so … but I do enjoy the challenge of their concise format …
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer.
I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.
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35 thoughts on “Church Mouse (a Haiku)”
I think you are doing great with the haiku, Ivor. This is a sweet one.
You are still the King of Haiku, Ivor! You can pack so much truth and importance…and evoke so much emotion…in your little 3 line 5/7/5 syllables-count poems! π
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(((HUGS))) π
PATS and RUBS to Sir Frankie! π
I think you are doing great with the haiku, Ivor. This is a sweet one.
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Thank you Lois , π€π
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I love haiku and you are a natural with them
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Thank you Beth , I only
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Whoops .. started writing them 3 years ago
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This one is great too
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Thank you Sadje .. they are fun to do for me πππ
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Youβre welcome my friend! Indeed, every poem is special
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I love your haikus Ivor .
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beautiful haiku ivor! Well done! xoxo
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Thank you Carol .. πππ
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You are bustin’ rocks here, my friend! You have a real knack!
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And I am not why I have the knack. .. I think I have rocks in my head
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You are still the King of Haiku, Ivor! You can pack so much truth and importance…and evoke so much emotion…in your little 3 line 5/7/5 syllables-count poems! π
π π π
(((HUGS))) π
PATS and RUBS to Sir Frankie! π
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Thank you dear Carolyn .. I am only Sir Ivor of The Round Pens π .. a knight with a champagne coloured doggie πΆ
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HA! π
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Very well done! Love it!
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Charming and engaging haiku, Ivor. I am a haiku fan, and when you add your whimsical touch, the result is a real winner! β€ π β€
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Thank you Cheryl. .. Haiku are a pleasurable way to experience my thoughts, especially when Iβm tired ππ
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You are inspired Ivor. I don’t know how to compose a haiku.
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This chimes like a tolling church bell! I havenβt written any haiku for agesβ¦
Canβt think why that is
Maybe itβs because I canβt
Write a short sentence.
Or is that a senryu? π
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You certainly are on a roll. π
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Thank you Sue… and a nice way to keep writing ..ππ
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This one is definitely on a roll
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Thank you Derrick
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Excellent haiku, Ivor! π
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Thank you Eugenia πππ
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Well written, Ivor.
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Thank you Navin ππ
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You’re welcome β¨
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Wow!! I love this haiku Ivor..! Amazing..!π
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Thank you Filarance πππ
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My pleasure Ivor..!
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wonderful Haiku Ivor!πππ
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I wanna share this with my friendsπππthankyou lois
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