Here is a poem I wrote last year, and today I am posting the piece as my response to “Go Dog Go Cafe’s” Halloween-themed Prompt Challenge (Guest Submissions), and you are welcome to participate via this link … > https://godoggocafe.com/2021/10/01/halloween-themed-prompt-challenge-guest-submissions/
The Reincarnation of a Pumpkin
My locked bubble is about to go boom
A year Iβve been a stranger in my own tomb
Under a pumpkin lid, hiding my gloom
Where my world was a rotting cave of doom
Now these orange walls are my life-giving womb
Being reborn like a smiling old groom
Iβm breaking away from the masterβs dead blooms
Escaping on the green witchβs magical broom
Flying over the full moon of autumn
Where Iβll be able to wear my mask and costume
Hidden under my orange Kaftan from Khartoum
And Iβll invade the newsrooms, and all the childrenβs bedrooms
Ivor Steven (c) October 2020

This is so good Ivor.
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Thank you Sadjeβ¦ ππππ
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Youβre welcome
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I do love a holloween poem π
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Thank you Willow .. I had a bit of fun with this one ππ
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It’s very cute βΊοΈ
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Wow, that took some word play -monorhyme is a toughie. Nice one, mate
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Oh .. I definitely needed my rhyme dictionary Jez πππ
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I bet you did lol
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Reblogged this on About the Jez of It and commented:
Excellent piece of wordmanship from Ivor
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Thank you for the reblog Jez πππ.. and now itβs sleep time .. 12.45am here in Geelong π€
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My pleasure, sleep sweet
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I remember this one Ivor: Halloween-tastic! π
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Yes.. for your Halloween prompt last year β¦. I had forgotten about it β¦ but I thought it would be a good promo for me βGo Dog Go Cafeβ Halloween guest writers prompt β¦ππ
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It certainly is! π
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Wonderful Halloween poem!
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Thank you Beth β¦ best you hide the Grandies β¦ππ
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)))
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oh what a fun poem Ivor.. BOO π
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Yes indeed Cindy.. I love writing my fun poems πππ
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And it soooo shows.. π
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What a lovely poem! π
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Thank you Pragalbha πππ
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I like the wordplay & depth…well written, Ivor…
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Khartoum was helpful, I’ll bet. Well done
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that’s actually very scary that you wrote this a year ago and still haven’t managed to ‘escape’ yet … when is your current lockdown supposed to end Ivor?
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We are currently out of lockdown here in Geelong … but things could change .. .. and I’m tired ..
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I bet everyone is weary to the bone of the carry on … and now we have a new premier changing it all around again …
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Awesome..!β¨β¨
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Yes β¦ a really fun poem for me πππ
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Awww..! That’s so cute..!ππ
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Very engaging and cheerful poem, Ivor. You made me smile! π Happy Halloween! β€
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Happy Halloween Cheryl … yes i had fun playing with words here ..ππππ
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Ooh! Yikes! and Ha! Great Halloween-y poem, Ivor! Great wordplay and vivid images!
Perfect trio with photo and music! π
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(((HUGS))) π
PATS and RUBS for Sir Frankie! π
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Thanks Carolyn … although ‘Halloween’ is not such a big thing down here in Aussie-land … ππππ
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I understand. It can be fun if done in the right ways. π I prefer the other parts of autumn betterer…the smells, foods, feels, sights, sounds. π
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And of course it’s springtime down here .. ππΆπ
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Yes! I like the cooler crisp autumn temps here in Sept-Nov…which you must get in the spring. ???
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A beautiful halloween poem…loved it..carry on
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Thank you for your kind words πππ
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my pleasure
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What a fun poem for Halloween, Ivor! π
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Thank you Eugenia .. yes some fun rhyming words ππππ
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My pleasure, Ivor! ππ
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