Throwback Friday, My First Two Haiku, by Ivor Steven

It was in May 2018 when I wrote my First 2 Haiku ….

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Today I am presenting the first two Haiku poems that I ever wrote, and they were from May 2018. which is just under four years ago. My first two attempts were reasonably well received and the concise haiku format seemed to suit my style of writing, and since that time I have written another “118 Haiku”

Sky Blue (my 1st Haiku)

I’m covered in blue

The morning sky clears my eyes

Sea-air fills my lungs

Today (my 2nd Haiku)

Rain, hail, or sunshine

The lover’s pen writes a line

Inside a hearts shrine

Ivor Steven (c) May 2018

G’day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I’m an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life…

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G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems.

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      3. Thank you, Ivor my friend. I appreciate having you as a wise senior friend whose thoughts change my young view of life. Have a wonderful day/night, and do check on my blogs once awhile. 🤗😊💕

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      4. I’m a busy man Felix .. my blog site is bigger than Mt Kosciusko, and I follow a huge number of fellow writers/bloggers .. and these days at my age, I do what I can, without stressing myself, and make sure that I get enough breaks and rest .. I’m a 3 time stroke sufferer .. and my Doc’ is always telling me slow 🌏🤗😊

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    1. Thank you Eugenia. .. and I think reading your older poems is good for you .. and most of the time you are able to revise and improve the piece .. although these 2 haiku were left in their original form 😊🌏📋

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