Over at Go Dog Go Cafeโs, Throwback Friday segment, I posted my revised poem, “Below An Alien Sky”

Originally this poem was called โBelow A Loyal Skyโ, but today I have slightly revised, the July 2018 piece, for todayโs article.
Below An Alien Sky (Revised)
I hide behind a mask
Youโll hear me ask
At the veil sales
Lurking in the back pews
Sneaking a view
Through a curtain of bamboo
Below the indigo-blue sky
I am just a loyal alien spy
Protecting my Prussian blue eyes
Ivor Steven (c) May 2018
Gโday, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. Iโm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. Iโve been blogging for over 4 years, and writing poems for 20 years. Of course a lot of my poems areโฆ
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lovely post behind the veil with a great song Ivor..
Happy Fun Fri-Yay!
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Thank you Cindy
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you’re so welcome Ivor!
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I agree, its a nice post.
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An intriguing poem, Ivor: I didnโt realise you were part alien! ๐ ๐ฝ
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๐๐ฝ … we are here to save the planet
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Thank Goodness! The Homo Sapiens donโt seem at all bothered about itโฆ ๐
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Yes .. they seem quite oblivious about their own deteriorating environment ๐ต๏ธ๐๐
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Sadly, yesโฆ
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Absolutely great
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Thank you Wlllow ๐๐๐๐ต๏ธ
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Words that arouse a curiosity as to what’s behind the ominous skies, Ivor.
Nicely written … I enjoyed the video. Good song. Have a very restful weekend …
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Thank you for reading my curious and inquisitive poem .. about feeling like an alien on this planet we are destroying ๐๐๐
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This is so great, Ivor!
And another of your ponderful poems that should produce concern and action from those of us who read. A powerful pairing with Dennis’ song. “Feeling like an alien…like a stranger lately”…in our world/society is something I’ve always felt, but even more so the past 7 years or so.
(((HUGS)))
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Thank you Carolyn โฆ yes I was pondering .. feeling like an alien on my own planet ๐ .. or is it my planet .. surely what I am witnessing cannot be real .. and I must be an alien spy๐ต๏ธ .. who is frightened by what he sees ๐๐๐
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I can so relate. And what a creative perspective to poet-about. ๐
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And itโs a poem I wrote 4 years ago โฆlooks Iโm always pondering ๐ค
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Being ponderful is a good thing. ๐ ๐ค
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A fun poem Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje ..
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Youโre welcome
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Okay, I am in love with the song!!! You do know that your posts have introduced me to so many amazing songs!
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I am pleased you are enjoying my song choices … I love exploring YouTube for suitable songs to go with my poems .. ๐ต๐๐๐ค
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Ah yes! And thank you sharing them here! ๐
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My pleasure
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So very good. I feel like I say the same thing over and over to you. I just love the way your poetry makes me feel. โค
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The older I become the more I feel I donโt belongโฆ just like an alien! ๐
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Yes!! … sometimes I feel like that too Sue
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