Today I am revisiting this post from 3 months ago, … I really liked the articles overall Presentation and pizzazz
This poem is made up of four separate comments that I have written on my fellow blogger’s articles.
The Title: Lori >> https://ecopoetic.wordpress.com/
First Stanza: Claudia >> https://humoringthegoddess.com/
Second Stanza & Finale Stanza: Colleen >> https://bikecolleenbrown.wordpress.com/
A Writerβs Wondrous World Watchfully Waits Where Wisdom Willingly Wanders Within Wizardry Walls
Once upon a midnight
After visiting Poe’s Raven site
My dark dreary nightmare took flight
And left me with a fluttering sprite
Over the many years of self-doubt
There is now no doubt
I have learned to strive beyond doubt
And accept my worthiness without doubt
Within us there is a small piece of air
Available for our soul to give and share
However most of our soul is there
For our self-love and self-care

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Ivor Steven © August 2022

Good grief
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Haha β¦ some fun with words π€πππ
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I’ve always been a big Poe fan. And yes, our souls need love and care to be able to share! I’m glad the really cute kids in your video clip found their wings & soared! π
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Wow. What worthy words!
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Maybe the title is too long ??
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Beautiful π
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Thank you Willowπ€πππ
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That is quite the title!
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Some fun with words Dale π€ππ
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Wowza! Wondrous W Words!
Such a creative write from 3 sources!
And the poem hits the heart in a good way…’tis a powerful important message…for peoples of all ages. π
(((HUGS))) π β€οΈ
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Thank you Carolyn .. my mixture of anecdotes seemed to work together ok β¦ my βWβ title was a fun comment I did for Lori, .. haha .. I think it ask my readers to have a look at my poem and read what what Iβm writing about π€ππππ
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Well done, Ivor π
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Thank you Sue .. my mixture of anecdotes seemed to work ok π€ππ
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Love this! So fun
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Thank you Annette .. howβs your book going π€π
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Love the creativity in this piece. π
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Thanks, Cassa, … I like the challenge of trying to put my anecdotal comments together …
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Enjoyed Ivor
& that is quite the title , π
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I looking for somewhere to use the anecdote I wrote for you β¦ and this mix of anecdotes seemed to be perfect β¦ haha the title is βlongβ, but maybe readers might be curious to find out what the poem is about π€ππ
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β it did that indeed βοΈ
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Yeah π€π
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Wow! So very clever! Love it!
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Thank you Eugenia .. haha .. cleverly the poem seemed to work ok π€πππ
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Most welcome, Ivor! π
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Well, didn’t that work out wonderfully!
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I surprised myself β¦ the poem almost makes sense β¦ except for the βworldsβ longest title ππππ
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Nothing wrong with that title!
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Yeah βοΈ
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Ivor,
What a fantastic title and I love this final stanza
Within us there is a small piece of air
Available for our soul to give and share
However most of our soul is there
For our self-love and self-care
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Thank you Ali β¦ Colleenβs wonderful words are always thought provoking and inspiring ππ€ππ
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Well, wonderfully winsome wisely worthy written words! π
(((HUGS))) π β€οΈ
PS…How are you feeling today?!
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Thanks Carolynβ¦ definitely a worthwhile write from my weary and wavering wand π€ππππΆ β¦ Iβm tired but exciting and looking forward to my Market stall day tomorrow π€ππ
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Good!!!!!!! π Let me know how it goes! π
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It’ll be a very interesting new experience for this 71 year-old poet … π€πππ
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This kind of response poem is always fun to read.
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Thanks Cassa, and I enjoy the process of putting them together π€π
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Lovely poems, Ivor…first one, almost a tautogram π«
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Thank you kindly Navin
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You’re welcome, Ivor β¨
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