


Bird Watching (a Haiku)
Cold, wet, and grounded
Jealous, I see him fly home
As hail stings my eyes
Ivor Steven (c) Aug 2023



Bird Watching (a Haiku)
Cold, wet, and grounded
Jealous, I see him fly home
As hail stings my eyes
Ivor Steven (c) Aug 2023
G'day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I'm an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I've been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I've been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20
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Mankind has always envied the birds for their ability to fly. In 2023, we still feel the same way! Even though we can easily board a plane, inventors still seek self-propelled flight! 🙂 I love your poem, Ivor!
Wishing you and Frankie fair weather! ❤
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments Cheryl… and we shall always be the jealous observers 🤗🌏😍🦅
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❤
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they are ever-free
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We are forever jealous
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Such an honor and a joy to watch the birds! They are always busy with their business, then off to somewhere. 🙂
A wonderful poem, Ivor! Relatable to all who read it. 🙂
I can’t remember who…but I read one time that “you must have the bird in your heart before you can find it in nature”…or something close to that. ❤️
(((HUGS))) ❤️🐦🕊🦅🦆🦉🦚🦢❤️
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Thank you Carolyn… we are the jealous ones, always in awe of their ability to fly … I watch in amazement and sigh … wishing for a stairway to their kingdom’s sky… 🤗🌏🦅😍😊
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There’s something magical about observing these graceful creatures in their natural habitats. It’s a peaceful and meditative experience! 🕊️🦆🦜 ✨✨
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I agree Jennifer … nature’s monarchs of the sky
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Your haiku captures a lot of emotion in just a few words. Beautiful
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Thank you very much Ali … watching nature’s monarchs of the sky always evokes my imagination …
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A beautiful moment
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Birds capture my imagination Derrick
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Amazing! 🙂
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Thank you kindly 🤗🌏🦅
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A wonderful haiku…so much you say through these words, Ivor ✨
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Thank you kindly Navin
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You’re welcome Ivor ✨
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