“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” – W.B. Yeats
One Butterfly (a Rhyming Haiku)
One white butterfly
Quietly fluttered nearby
Breathless! I said Hi
“Song Of Wandering Aengus” A poem by W B Yeats
I went out to the hazel wood
Because a fire was in my head
And cut and peeled a hazel wand
And hooked a berry to a thread.
And when white moths were on the wing
And moth-like stars were flickering out
I dropped the berry in a stream
And caught a little silver trout.
When I had laid it on the ground
I went to blow the fire a-flame
But something rustled on the floor
And some one called me by my name.
It had become a glimmering girl
With apple blossom in her hair
Who called me by my name and ran
And faded through the brightening air.
Though I am old with wandering
Through hollow lands and hilly lands
I will find out where she has gone
And kiss her lips and take her hands.
And walk among long dappled grass
And pluck till time and times are done
The silver apples of the moon
The golden apples of the sun
The silver apples of the moon
The golden apples of the sun.

Fine poems, both
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Thank you Derrick
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Sweet 🦋
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I need to find my old old book of poetry and start reading some of the old masters. Your rhyming haiku is just wonderful.
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Thank you Claudia … Haiku are not supposed to rhyme but I thought “why not” 😊🌏📖
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I like both poems, Ivor. 🙂
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Thank you Sue … W B Yeats was one of the greats … and some of his magical words leave me breathless …😊🦋💙
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I can relate to that. 🙂
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I love reading poetry!
That Yeats poem is one I’ve read and it’s beautiful!
Your haiku is beautiful, too, Ivor! I read it out loud…it made me smile and SIGH. 🙂 ❤️ Butterflies ALWAYS bring joy with them! 🦋🦋🦋
You’re in my thoughts and prayers today.
(((HUGS))) and ❤️❤️ for you and for Sir Frankie!!
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Thank you very much Carolyn … I’m vey pleased with my Haiku and I might submit it to Spillwords Press … oh W B Yeats poem is truly magical and I was trying to capture an aura of magic with my little Haiku 🦋🦋🦋💙🌏🐶
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You should submit it! 🙂
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Thanks 💙🦋
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She whispered back, “Well hello there.”
Lovely poem and thank you for the Yeats! I think he mixed some mushrooms with that trout.
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Thanks Niki … he definitely had a magical imagination 🦋💙🌏😊😍
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Haiku and rhyme both!
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e not supposed to go together!
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but it works!
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Haha, clever me …
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Unconventional, but a lovely poem and photo, Ivor! ❤
I read the Yeats poem a couple of times. I didn't understand the poem when I read it in school. Now, I get it on an emotional level, though the poem is dreamlike and has mysterious metaphors. It is a beautiful poem. Thank you for posting it!
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The perfect combination for me Cheryl , W B Yeats and the Waterboys 🎶📖💙😍
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The musical version was well done. ❤
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The Waterboys have an excellent Album called “An Appointment With Mr Yeats” which every song is a musical interpretation of a Yeats poem … 📖🎶💙
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Not sure if I have heard of the Waterboys. Great poem.
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Thank you Chrissy… the Waterboys are a Celtic band
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ahhh…
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Breaking the Haiku rules… Love it 😜 It’s a great Haiku, very whimsical
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Thanks Bree … I was never one for following the rules 😊😉
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Such a cute haiku! 😊
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Thank you kindly 😊🌏🦋
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